Luis/Axel,

Thanks for your review and comments. We've incorporated many of the
stylistic comments. With respect to the proposal to add "and we will
enter into similar agreements with any new third party service
providers with whom we might share data in the future." ? (Or
something to that effect.)" we have not added this language. I don't
think its necessary in this case  because the policy governs what we
do, until changed otherwise.  Thus, if we entered into a different
relationship that was inconsistent with the policy, we would have to
first change the policy and go through a review and comment process.
Basil is posting a revised version shortly that includes the
revisions. We've also included a sentence that links to a page that
will identify specifically which Mozilla web properties use the web
analytics tool.

Harvey

Per this feedback on this topic, you'll find what we hope is the final  
revision to the Mozilla privacy policy. (At least for this go around.)

HTML Policy with links
http://people.mozilla.com/~basil/privacy/LOCAL-privacy-policy.html
http://people.mozilla.com/~basil/privacy/LOCAL-third-party.html

PDF Diff since the April 2008 (first revision)
http://people.mozilla.com/~basil/privacy/PP-Apr08-v1_vs_v2.pdf

What's changed:
- Added some text around where to update personal info
- Some clarification in the "How We Use Cookies and Clear GIFs" section
- Enumerated the websites for which Omniture will be used

Assuming that no additional significant comments are provided, this is  
the one that will be live on Monday.

Thanks,

-Basil

On Apr 17, 2008, at 2:30 PM, hander...@mozilla.com wrote:

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