it's making up all the rules as you go.
it's telling and not showing.
it's getting old.
...
(and reading your early stuff).
-$Zero...
the best thing about being a writer -- part XIX
http://groups.google.com/group/misc.writing/msg/9cc5f4136c5d8c3b
"The more a man knows,
the more he forgives."
-- Confucius