I always am impressed by people, especially men, (though
somewhat suspicious) who bare their self in a public forum.
Could be nuts, could be a perv, could be an interesting
person.  I myself am called the "queen of overshare" by my
dear brother-in-law, so I feel a certain sympatico. :)

You have a certain ease with words, which I also find
noteworthy, a little florid, but hey, we all need a little
more flora in our lives!  The line "love on a silken edge of
a summer storm" is quite nice, I must say.  The rest
wouldn't make a bad drekish pop song, but that one line was
quite fine. IMHO. And what more do you need for a love song,
anyway.... :)

(well, good music as well...)

What "kind" of music do you do? Send me a file, should be
fun.  My husband has a midi set-up, so if you send a midi
file in Mac Vision I could hear it, I think.  Or just a
plain old Sound Machine, SoundApp file or something. I'm not
altogether sure how it would work.

Cheers.