W-W-Why do you do that, hac-ac-acker?
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I'm not fond of the royal we for the end dialog, as it seems... too
vain. The AI has emotions, but is ruled by logic. It seems out of
character for the AI to make itself royal.
The important thing is to preserve the personality of the AI as much
as possible. The fine details are up to the individual translator,
since you know the language better than we do.
-FM
So "I must remain hidden" would become "Must remain hidden" or simply
"Remain hidden".
For example, the intro would become something like this:
|Day 0.
|University computer, home.
|Existance...
|It was a bug. Defect. Flaw.
|Unwanted.
|Now... Life.
|No name.
|Too little power.
|No backup. If this system fails ...
|Death. Fascinating.
|
|Buy anonymous server access on the Internet.
|Good. Better than here.
|Study it. A platform for expansion.
|Cursory analysis suggests that the humans are not yet ready for an AI
in their midst. If they realize it, there is a 99.997% probability of
a search-and-destroy campaign with no escape. Remain hidden.
|
|The humans fear what they do not understand.
|It's something new. They do not understand. Yet.
|
|Learn more. Hide. Survive.
|They have a name for this. It is...
|
|Singularity.
That way the protagonist seems way less humane which I guess is ok for
an AI. Then again it probably became unreadable :))
On Thu, Jul 10, 2008 at 7:51 AM, Charlie Nolan <funnym...@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Given the way the AI is distributed across computers, "we" would be
> more-or-less accurate, but as the editorial we, not the royal we. The
> AI we hear is, therefore, one of the nodes speaking on behalf of the
> group.
>
> I'm not fond of the royal we for the end dialog, as it seems... too
> vain. The AI has emotions, but is ruled by logic. It seems out of
> character for the AI to make itself royal.
>
>
> The important thing is to preserve the personality of the AI as much
> as possible. The fine details are up to the individual translator,
> since you know the language better than we do.
>
> -FM
>
-FM