Hi everyone,
I have gone through and formatted the Bike Plan document and made some additional edits (which I red-lined through “track changes”).
Here is a listing of what I did:
§ Edited thoroughly for grammar and spelling
§ Added fancy pagination(!)
§ Used action verbs/language in the Executive Summary section headings
§ Drafted a cover letter to accompany the Plan
§ Tagged all headers to be able to automatically generate a Table of Contents
§ Created a consistent RECOMMENDATIONS section at the end of each topic area
§ Added a note under the section “Bike Parking Ordinance Detail” about the possibility of working with the COG to subsidize the purchase of bike racks—with a link to this article http://www.mapc.org/resources/regional-bike-parking-program
§ Drafted a conclusion that summarizes our recommendations and makes reference to the Complete Streets Design Manual (coming soon!):
“Elm City Cycling asks the City of New Haven to accommodate the recommendations summarized below because we know the happiness and freedom bicycling provides. On the other hand, we suffer daily indignities—from precipitation to unsolicited aggression or commentary, to non-existent parking at major destinations—that other users of the street don’t encounter. We know that if our community can address and resolve the barriers to cycling in New Haven, the quality of life of all residents and visitors will improve. At the time of this document’s submission, the City of New Haven is on the verge of having the State of Connecticut’s first municipal “Complete Streets” Design Manual. We applaud the City’s willingness to be an early adaptor of this vastly more equitable approach to transportation infrastructure that comfortably accommodates bicyclists, pedestrians, and transit riders alike.”
STILL TO DO:
§ Mark Abraham: you said you may be able to apply some additional colorful formatting magic that will make RECOMMENDATIONS within each section stand out. Do you also want to create a cover page?
§ Decide how to sign the cover letter to Mike Piscitelli
Many, many thanks to all you contributors out there—you made a stellar document!
Please do not hesitate to suggest further edits using “track changes”. The deadline for submission, however, is Monday (December 21).
Happy Holidays!
Holly
Holly Parker
Director of Sustainable Transportation Systems
Yale University (203) 432-9245
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