Read again, i correct a typo in my explanation of my poem of Love..

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Read again, i correct a typo in my explanation of my poem of Love..

Notice that i am saying the following in my poem below:

"Your beauty is like a beautiful night with its beautiful stars
So then i am seeing too that your beauty is as old as the stars
Your beauty is like a beautiful night with its beautiful stars
So come to me beautiful since you'r coming from so afar"

It's like a word game, the first word of "stars" in the following line:

"Your beauty is like a beautiful night with its beautiful stars"


Are the stars that we see in a night sky.


But the second word of "stars" that is plural of "star" in the following
line of my poem:

"So then i am seeing too that your beauty is as old as the stars"

Is a person who is preeminent in a particular field, so
if you are so beautiful, so i think you are preeminent in the fields that need beauty, so this is why i am saying in my poem of Love:
"So then i am seeing too that your beauty is as old as the stars"

So read the rest to understand better about philosophy about universality of beauty..

More philosophy about universality of beauty..

I was just reading the following webpage:

The myth of universal beauty

https://www.bbc.com/future/article/20150622-the-myth-of-universal-beauty


And notice that the webapage starts by saying:

"The myth of universal beauty"

So here we have to be more smart, i think to answer this question
of: Is beauty universal ? it is by logical analogy as measuring
the truth quantitatively or qualitatively, so if you measure
the truth by quantity, we can not be "certain" of the truthfulness,
but if we measure it by enough "quality" that gives the truth,
so it will be truth, this is the key to answering the question,
so beauty must be measured by enough quality of "smartness", not
by quantity, so then it is this smartness that sees what is
beauty, and this way of doing is the way of a civilized society,
so this is why i think that we can find characteristics of beauty
that are "universal". So then i don't agree with the above
webpage that says: "The myth of universal beauty".

Other than that notice in my following poem about beauty that
i am saying the following:

"Your beauty is like a beautiful night with its beautiful stars
So then i am seeing too that your beauty is as old as the stars
Your beauty is like a beautiful night with its beautiful stars
So come to me beautiful since you'r coming from so afar"


So notice that i am saying:

"So then i am seeing too that your beauty is as old as the stars"

So notice that the dictionary says that the "as" means the following:

https://www.dictionary.com/browse/as


So notice that it says that the "as" means also " similarly",
and in the dictionary "similarly" means having a likeness or resemblance, especially in a general way, so that means
that my poem is speaking about this similarity of beauty,
so i am also talking in my poem about those characteristics of
beauty that are universal. So read my following poem of Love
to understand:


Here my final enhanced version of my new poem of Love:


Your beauty is like a beautiful night with its beautiful stars

So then i am seeing too that your beauty is as old as the stars

Your beauty is like a beautiful night with its beautiful stars

So come to me beautiful since you'r coming from so afar

Your beauty is like a beautiful night with its beautiful stars

Since you are of this so old and so beautiful that is as my beautiful rewards

Your beauty is like a beautiful night with its beautiful stars

Since so beautiful is your soul and your charm !

Your beauty is like a beautiful night with its beautiful stars

It is as the beautiful of the so beautiful arts !

Your beauty is like a beautiful night with its beautiful stars

It is as our beautiful love is wanting to stay and not to depart !

Your beauty is like a beautiful night with its beautiful stars

It is as we are with our beautiful love winning many awards !

Your beauty is like a beautiful night with its beautiful stars

It is as our beautiful love that is far from the evil wars !

Your beauty is like a beautiful night with its beautiful stars

It as it is the absolute love and as between me and you there is no walls

Your beauty is like a beautiful night with its beautiful stars

So then i am seeing too that your beauty is as old as the stars !

Your beauty is like a beautiful night with its beautiful stars

So come to me beautiful since you'r coming from so afar !



Thank you,
Amine Moulay Ramdane.

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Very nice. I find your use of polyptoton with "beautiful" to be quite beautifully done.