I correct a little english mistake in my poem, read it again..

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Hello,,

Read this:


I correct a little english mistake in my poem, read it again..

Here is another poem of love that i have just written:

I am a white arab from Morocco who speaks and writes english and french
and arabic, please read it bellow:

Read it listening at the same time at this beautiful song:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_W2jONIjrM0&index=6&list=RDMMWdo-ZiHqbls


Here is my new poem of love:


The pretty and the beautiful

Look like your pretty eyes

And our pretty little raft

Who challenges storms and hurricanes

Remember me your wisdom

Because time is also to lovers

Because lovers time is like a mason

Who build skyscrapers!

Because love is also powerful

Thus the nightingale sings

Our love in chorus

Because love does not like war

Because the sword is wound and tears

And like rivers, fountains and streams

The weather is like a raft!

Because lightness and burden!

But our love is a pretty fir

Because Christmas is our destiny

And with your lovely pretty eyes

You carry me on the wind and the Rainbow

To drive us to a beautiful island

Like our love and tenderness

Rather for goods never I leave you!

My sweet and beautiful goddess

My sweet spring and my sweet princess

Our hearts finally beat in unison

Like a nice thrill and a nice song

Because you are like the pretty flower that can not die!

As if both of us were as one

Let's be the flower and the perfum!

And may infinity and depth bring us together

Since our destiny has understood

That the pretty fir is not cursed

Because Christmas is divine

Because Christmass is our destiny



Thank you,
Amine Moulay Ramdane.