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Yet i have made the following new poem of love more beautiful

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Sep 5, 2018, 12:25:53 PM9/5/18
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Hello...

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Yet i have made the following new poem of love more beautiful, so here
is bellow my "final" version of my poem of love, and before. here is
more explanation of my following final version of my beautiful poem of love:

You have to understand "mathematically" my poem of love, because
you have to put it in "context", because the "context" is that i am
writing it from "earth" and when i say:

"You are beautiful
Like the sound of the divine silence of the universe
Like the immensity of the universe
That remind us of the preciousness of life"

So since i am writing it from earth , so when i say:

"Like the sound of the divine silence of the universe"

I mean that it is the universe that is "outside" of earth.


Read again, and put the above context in place to be more smart:

You have to understand how i am thinking my following poem of love,
look at it, it starts by:


"You are beautiful
Like the sound of the divine silence of the universe
Like the immensity of the universe
That remind us of the preciousness of life"

I was writing this by also imagining astronauts that go outside earth
(to the moon or outside earth) that are feeling this complete "silence"
of the universe that is like divine(because it is a great wisdom that
makes us understand) and the immensity of the universe , so by seeing
this divine silence of the universe and the immensity of the universe
astronauts are capable of "feeling" more correctly beauty of earth and
beauty of love, and notice that when i say that: "Like the sound of the
divine silence of the universe", this divine silence of the universe
symbolizes also the absence of life.


And also when i say:

"You are beautiful
Like the sound of the divine silence of the universe
Like the immensity of the universe
That remind us of the preciousness of life"

How can i say that:

"You are beautiful
Like the sound of the divine silence of the universe
Like the immensity of the universe"

Is it illogical ? Can we say that beauty is such things ?

Yes we can say it, because the sound of the divine silence of the
universe and the immensity of the universe is "great" wisdom that
makes us indirectly "feel" and "understand" more correctly beauty and
love ! so this great wisdom is beauty ! so it is logical and mathematical.

This how my poetry can be understood.

And now you are capable to understand more correctly my beautiful poem
of love, read again my following poem of love that is "timeless" and you
will notice it..

I am a white arab from Morocco, this is my final version of my poem of
love that is "timeless", i have thought it in arabic and wrote it also
in english, so i invite you to read my poem of love listening at the
same time at this song of of Men at Work called Land Down Under:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8jHXu86O01w


Here is my final version of my poem of love:


Because you are beautiful

Like the sound of the divine silence of the universe

Like the immensity of the universe

That remind us of the preciousness of life

You are beautiful

Like the wild nature who thought and created beauty

Like the wild nature who thought and created love

Because your beauty is perfection of beauty

Who is love and tolerance

Because you are like the beauty of the oasis

Who defies the tourmants of the desert

Because your beauty is like the precious jewels

Like the emeralds

And like the rubbis

And like the sapphires

And like the diamonds

You are beautiful and still beautiful

You are the greatness of beauty and love

That even the infinite time

Is singing our destiny with love

Because our love is divine perfume

Because our love is timeless

Because our love is infinite future and present

Because our love is like the light that soften the hearts

Like the beat of the wings of the Bees and little birds

Because our love is divine and greatness

Because our love is made of light and sweetness

Because we are prophets and we are angels

That even the angels are calling us to join the Lord

Because our love has already joined God and the angels

Because our love is eternal life

Because our love live in the Garden of Eden

Because my love is arabic

And your love is divine

Like the divine wisdom of angels

Like rose and rosemary

Our tomorrow is made of light and fragrance

Because our love is immense and infinite

That only the greatness of God can define

As we are light as the beautiful angels

So approach me infinite light

I want you as want us God Himself

Because we will never die

Because we are destiny of absolute love.



Thank you,
Amine Moulay Ramdane.

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