Hello...
Read this:
Yet i have made the following new poem of love more beautiful, so here
is bellow my "final" version of my poem of love, and before. here is
more explanation of my following final version of my beautiful poem of love:
You have to understand "mathematically" my poem of love, because
you have to put it in "context", because the "context" is that i am
writing it from "earth" and when i say:
"You are beautiful
Like the sound of the divine silence of the universe
Like the immensity of the universe
That remind us of the preciousness of life"
So since i am writing it from earth , so when i say:
"Like the sound of the divine silence of the universe"
I mean that it is the universe that is "outside" of earth.
Read again, and put the above context in place to be more smart:
You have to understand how i am thinking my following poem of love,
look at it, it starts by:
"You are beautiful
Like the sound of the divine silence of the universe
Like the immensity of the universe
That remind us of the preciousness of life"
I was writing this by also imagining astronauts that go outside earth
(to the moon or outside earth) that are feeling this complete "silence"
of the universe that is like divine(because it is a great wisdom that
makes us understand) and the immensity of the universe , so by seeing
this divine silence of the universe and the immensity of the universe
astronauts are capable of "feeling" more correctly beauty of earth and
beauty of love, and notice that when i say that: "Like the sound of the
divine silence of the universe", this divine silence of the universe
symbolizes also the absence of life.
And also when i say:
"You are beautiful
Like the sound of the divine silence of the universe
Like the immensity of the universe
That remind us of the preciousness of life"
How can i say that:
"You are beautiful
Like the sound of the divine silence of the universe
Like the immensity of the universe"
Is it illogical ? Can we say that beauty is such things ?
Yes we can say it, because the sound of the divine silence of the
universe and the immensity of the universe is "great" wisdom that
makes us indirectly "feel" and "understand" more correctly beauty and
love ! so this great wisdom is beauty ! so it is logical and mathematical.
This how my poetry can be understood.
And now you are capable to understand more correctly my beautiful poem
of love, read again my following poem of love that is "timeless" and you
will notice it..
I am a white arab from Morocco, this is my final version of my poem of
love that is "timeless", i have thought it in arabic and wrote it also
in english, so i invite you to read my poem of love listening at the
same time at this song of of Men at Work called Land Down Under:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8jHXu86O01w
Here is my final version of my poem of love:
Because you are beautiful
Like the sound of the divine silence of the universe
Like the immensity of the universe
That remind us of the preciousness of life
You are beautiful
Like the wild nature who thought and created beauty
Like the wild nature who thought and created love
Because your beauty is perfection of beauty
Who is love and tolerance
Because you are like the beauty of the oasis
Who defies the tourmants of the desert
Because your beauty is like the precious jewels
Like the emeralds
And like the rubbis
And like the sapphires
And like the diamonds
You are beautiful and still beautiful
You are the greatness of beauty and love
That even the infinite time
Is singing our destiny with love
Because our love is divine perfume
Because our love is timeless
Because our love is infinite future and present
Because our love is like the light that soften the hearts
Like the beat of the wings of the Bees and little birds
Because our love is divine and greatness
Because our love is made of light and sweetness
Because we are prophets and we are angels
That even the angels are calling us to join the Lord
Because our love has already joined God and the angels
Because our love is eternal life
Because our love live in the Garden of Eden
Because my love is arabic
And your love is divine
Like the divine wisdom of angels
Like rose and rosemary
Our tomorrow is made of light and fragrance
Because our love is immense and infinite
That only the greatness of God can define
As we are light as the beautiful angels
So approach me infinite light
I want you as want us God Himself
Because we will never die
Because we are destiny of absolute love.
Thank you,
Amine Moulay Ramdane.