1. I'd invert paragraph 1 + 2. I think it reads a lot better with
information about Hive13 before information about the event.
2. I'd mix language a little more and use both the words "makerspace" and
"hackerspace." Was this a deliberate decision when dealing with John Q.
Public or?
3. I'd mention something about the 3 year anniversary of the space.
I'm using it as a guideline for submitting this as an event to CityBeat.
Hopefully it's not too late to make next week's edition. I found Hive13
through Citybeat - we should put something in their events section.
-Dave B.
On Wed, Jul 11, 2012 at 1:59 PM, Tiffany Vincent
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"Hive13 is Cincinnati's only not-for-profit makerspace. Hive13 aims to
create a place where a diverse community can collaborate and pursue
creative projects. In addition to celebrating its third birthday, this
free open house will give the public a chance to explore the unique
resources of the facility. In the 3500 sq-ft space there will be
soldering, resin casting, 3D printing, laser cutting and lock picking among
other activities. Also, members will be showcasing some of their completed
projects and there will be regular tours of the space highlighting the
tools and resources available. "
Hey Dave, I actually already submitted event info to City Beat and
Metromix. I wish you'd seen the poster last night when I passed it around
for criticism.
In the release info I sent to the papers, I included info about the
anniversary. I think you're right to include both Makerspace and
Hackerspace. I'll update tonight and send out a revision. I'm also happy
to do different versions as needed (or I can provide the source file).
Tif
On Jul 11, 2012 6:03 PM, "Dave B." <blun...@gmail.com> wrote:
> 1. I'd invert paragraph 1 + 2. I think it reads a lot better with
> information about Hive13 before information about the event.
> 2. I'd mix language a little more and use both the words "makerspace" and
> "hackerspace." Was this a deliberate decision when dealing with John Q.
> Public or?
> 3. I'd mention something about the 3 year anniversary of the space.
> I'm using it as a guideline for submitting this as an event to CityBeat.
> Hopefully it's not too late to make next week's edition. I found Hive13
> through Citybeat - we should put something in their events section.
> -Dave B.
> On Wed, Jul 11, 2012 at 1:59 PM, Tiffany Vincent <
> tiffany.vinc...@gmail.com> wrote:
>> Poster attached. Please hang it up wherever makers can be found.
>> tif
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> Hey Dave, I actually already submitted event info to City Beat and
> Metromix. I wish you'd seen the poster last night when I passed it around
> for criticism.
> In the release info I sent to the papers, I included info about the
> anniversary. I think you're right to include both Makerspace and
> Hackerspace. I'll update tonight and send out a revision. I'm also happy
> to do different versions as needed (or I can provide the source file).
> Tif
> On Jul 11, 2012 6:03 PM, "Dave B." <blun...@gmail.com> wrote:
>> Very Good! Thanks for making this up!
>> My only criticisms:
>> 1. I'd invert paragraph 1 + 2. I think it reads a lot better with
>> information about Hive13 before information about the event.
>> 2. I'd mix language a little more and use both the words "makerspace" and
>> "hackerspace." Was this a deliberate decision when dealing with John Q.
>> Public or?
>> 3. I'd mention something about the 3 year anniversary of the space.
>> I'm using it as a guideline for submitting this as an event to CityBeat.
>> Hopefully it's not too late to make next week's edition. I found Hive13
>> through Citybeat - we should put something in their events section.
>> -Dave B.
>> On Wed, Jul 11, 2012 at 1:59 PM, Tiffany Vincent <
>> tiffany.vinc...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>> Poster attached. Please hang it up wherever makers can be found.
>>> tif
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Tif, you did a great job with it. There might be duplicate submissions to
Citybeat lol. My mistake. I saw the flyer last night and I guess my brain
didn't work. Thanks a lot for taking the time to put together something so
aesthetically pleasing!
-D
On Wed, Jul 11, 2012 at 7:08 PM, Craig <agent.cr...@gmail.com> wrote:
> I created an event on g+
> On Wed, Jul 11, 2012 at 6:40 PM, Tiffany Vincent <
> tiffany.vinc...@gmail.com> wrote:
>> Hey Dave, I actually already submitted event info to City Beat and
>> Metromix. I wish you'd seen the poster last night when I passed it around
>> for criticism.
>> In the release info I sent to the papers, I included info about the
>> anniversary. I think you're right to include both Makerspace and
>> Hackerspace. I'll update tonight and send out a revision. I'm also happy
>> to do different versions as needed (or I can provide the source file).
>> Tif
>> On Jul 11, 2012 6:03 PM, "Dave B." <blun...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>> Very Good! Thanks for making this up!
>>> My only criticisms:
>>> 1. I'd invert paragraph 1 + 2. I think it reads a lot better with
>>> information about Hive13 before information about the event.
>>> 2. I'd mix language a little more and use both the words "makerspace"
>>> and "hackerspace." Was this a deliberate decision when dealing with John
>>> Q. Public or?
>>> 3. I'd mention something about the 3 year anniversary of the space.
>>> I'm using it as a guideline for submitting this as an event to CityBeat.
>>> Hopefully it's not too late to make next week's edition. I found Hive13
>>> through Citybeat - we should put something in their events section.
>>> -Dave B.
>>> On Wed, Jul 11, 2012 at 1:59 PM, Tiffany Vincent <
>>> tiffany.vinc...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>> Poster attached. Please hang it up wherever makers can be found.
>>>> tif
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On Wed, Jul 11, 2012 at 9:03 PM, Dave B. <blun...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Tif, you did a great job with it. There might be duplicate submissions to
> Citybeat lol. My mistake. I saw the flyer last night and I guess my brain
> didn't work. Thanks a lot for taking the time to put together something so
> aesthetically pleasing!
> -D
> On Wed, Jul 11, 2012 at 7:08 PM, Craig <agent.cr...@gmail.com> wrote:
>> I created an event on g+
>> On Wed, Jul 11, 2012 at 6:40 PM, Tiffany Vincent <
>> tiffany.vinc...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>> Hey Dave, I actually already submitted event info to City Beat and
>>> Metromix. I wish you'd seen the poster last night when I passed it around
>>> for criticism.
>>> In the release info I sent to the papers, I included info about the
>>> anniversary. I think you're right to include both Makerspace and
>>> Hackerspace. I'll update tonight and send out a revision. I'm also happy
>>> to do different versions as needed (or I can provide the source file).
>>> Tif
>>> On Jul 11, 2012 6:03 PM, "Dave B." <blun...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>> Very Good! Thanks for making this up!
>>>> My only criticisms:
>>>> 1. I'd invert paragraph 1 + 2. I think it reads a lot better with
>>>> information about Hive13 before information about the event.
>>>> 2. I'd mix language a little more and use both the words "makerspace"
>>>> and "hackerspace." Was this a deliberate decision when dealing with John
>>>> Q. Public or?
>>>> 3. I'd mention something about the 3 year anniversary of the space.
>>>> I'm using it as a guideline for submitting this as an event to
>>>> CityBeat. Hopefully it's not too late to make next week's edition. I
>>>> found Hive13 through Citybeat - we should put something in their events
>>>> section.
>>>> -Dave B.
>>>> On Wed, Jul 11, 2012 at 1:59 PM, Tiffany Vincent <
>>>> tiffany.vinc...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>> Poster attached. Please hang it up wherever makers can be found.
>>>>> tif
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