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derek

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Aug 23, 2004, 7:57:39 PM8/23/04

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V.

it stands naked
reflected in the nocturn

leg and arm
still

branch, root and
split

XV.

glass-starlitshard
imbedded under muscle
deci-size ID
unleshed upon
unsuspected

Morpheal

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Aug 25, 2004, 9:14:46 PM8/25/04

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derek wrote and morpheal interpolated:

> V.
inverted

> it stands naked
a mirrored twist of fate
> reflected in the nocturn
of new found blindness

> leg and arm
the twitching signals
> still
indicating proper motions

> branch, root and
thigh
> split
open to the marrow

> XV.
being a quarter

> glass-starlitshard
pierced through the navel
> imbedded under muscle
the ramrod
> deci-size ID
tied with titanium wires
> unleashed upon
arbitrators of destinies
> unsuspected
beneath her undergarments.

R.M.

Amathyzt

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Aug 26, 2004, 2:11:21 PM8/26/04

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"Morpheal" <morp...@sympatico.ca> wrote in message
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> derek wrote and morpheal interpolated:
>
> > V.
> inverted

drops

>
> > it stands naked
> a mirrored twist of fate

with white knuckle color

> > reflected in the nocturn
> of new found blindness

and cheap passengers

>
> > leg and arm
> the twitching signals

quite
> > still
> indicating proper motions
needless instructions
>
> > branch, root and
> thigh
high puppet strings

> > split
> open to the marrow

gently penciled
>
> > XV.
> being a quarter
90°

>
> > glass-starlitshard
> pierced through the navel

and into her womb

> > imbedded under muscle
> the ramrod

lover

> > deci-size ID
> tied with titanium wires

of ancient trapezes

> > unleashed upon
> arbitrators of destinies

standing in line
> > unsuspected
> beneath her undergarments.
forgotten
>
> R.M.

derek

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Aug 27, 2004, 11:31:03 AM8/27/04

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Please don't crosspost my poems. I am cross-cross posting this time and one
more only to ensure that you may see it. If you wish to add, i ask that you
check to see if that is ok. Usually I will state whether or not a poem is
a corpse or not at the post's end.

http://artlibre.org/licence.php/lalgb.html
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Copyleft

Amathyzt

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Aug 27, 2004, 12:57:41 PM8/27/04

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Unfortunately I don't think you can say when it's okay to add
or not, it was a poem wasn't it?

The additional contributions are as valid as any critique aren't they?
Moreso than most seen useless banter at the very least.

Amathyzt

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Morpheal

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Aug 31, 2004, 10:45:11 PM8/31/04

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Actually, it works the same as life. Everything is interpolated.
The very fact of finding meaning is itself interpolation. The
reading of a poem or piece of prose, or the hearing of a conversation
is never purely what it is, and cannot be purely what it is or was,
but the is that happens each time is interpolated anew. That is
how we create meaning from the given, by reading into it.

R.M.

Morpheal

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Aug 31, 2004, 10:56:15 PM8/31/04

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Amathyzt wrote and was interpolated:

> > > V.
> > inverted
> drops
driving in its point

> >
> > > it stands naked
> > a mirrored twist of fate
> with white knuckle color

claiming a victory

> > > reflected in the nocturn
> > of new found blindness
> and cheap passengers

mentally masturbating

> >
> > > leg and arm
> > the twitching signals
> quite

prolonged

> > > still
> > indicating proper motions
> needless instructions

printed on synaptic linings

> >
> > > branch, root and
> > thigh
> high puppet strings

stop them from dancing

> > > split
> > open to the marrow
> gently penciled

into rolladex entries

> >
> > > XV.
> > being a quarter
> 90°

and held there.

> >
> > > glass-starlitshard
> > pierced through the navel
> and into her womb

giving birth to mirrors

> > > imbedded under muscle
> > the ramrod
> lover

opened the forbidden

> > > deci-size ID
> > tied with titanium wires
> of ancient trapezes

a swinging suspended pelvis

> > > unleashed upon
> > arbitrators of destinies
> standing in line

for dispensed gratifications

> > > unsuspected
> > beneath her undergarments.
> forgotten

.45 calibre hollowpoint.

R.M.

Amathyzt

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Sep 8, 2004, 8:53:27 AM9/8/04

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"Morpheal" <morp...@sympatico.ca> wrote in message

news:41353A4F...@sympatico.ca...

Amathyzt wrote and was interpolated:

>> > > V.
>> > inverted
>> drops
>driving in its point

to chip

>> > > it stands naked
>> > a mirrored twist of fate
>> with white knuckle color
>claiming a victory

in pose

>> > > reflected in the nocturn
>> > of new found blindness
>> and cheap passengers
>mentally masturbating

the creator of

>> > > leg and arm
>> > the twitching signals
>> quite
>prolonged

seconds

>> > > still
>> > indicating proper motions
>> needless instructions
>printed on synaptic linings

outwardly opaque

>> > > branch, root and
>> > thigh
>> high puppet strings
>stop them from dancing

off balance

>> > > split
>> > open to the marrow
>> gently penciled
>into rolladex entries

transferred to stone

>> > > XV.
>> > being a quarter
>> 90°
>and held there.

effortlessly

>> > > glass-starlitshard
>> > pierced through the navel
>> and into her womb
>giving birth to mirrors

of a life

>> > > imbedded under muscle
>> > the ramrod
>> lover
>opened the forbidden

to all eyes

>> > > deci-size ID
>> > tied with titanium wires
>> of ancient trapezes
>a swinging suspended pelvis

looks molded

>> > > unleashed upon
>> > arbitrators of destinies
>> standing in line
>for dispensed gratifications

behind the velvet ropes

>> > > unsuspected
>> > beneath her undergarments.
>> forgotten
>.45 calibre hollowpoint.

is authenticated

>R.M.

derek

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Sep 8, 2004, 6:49:21 PM9/8/04

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poop

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Morpheal

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Sep 8, 2004, 7:24:38 PM9/8/04

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Amathyzt wrote and Morpheal Interpolated:

> >> > > V.
> >> > inverted
> >> drops
> >driving in its point
> to chip

away at any remaining boundaries

>
> >> > > it stands naked
> >> > a mirrored twist of fate
> >> with white knuckle color
> >claiming a victory
> in pose

frozen on the operating table

> >> > > reflected in the nocturn
> >> > of new found blindness
> >> and cheap passengers
> >mentally masturbating
> the creator of

sexually suggestive

>
> >> > > leg and arm
> >> > the twitching signals
> >> quite
> >prolonged
> seconds

offer pistols to duellers

> >> > > still
> >> > indicating proper motions
> >> needless instructions
> >printed on synaptic linings
> outwardly opaque

anticipating deep scars

> >> > > branch, root and
> >> > thigh
> >> high puppet strings
> >stop them from dancing
> off balance

as they cock triggers

> >> > > split
> >> > open to the marrow
> >> gently penciled
> >into rolladex entries
> transferred to stone

hard surrender

>
> >> > > XV.
> >> > being a quarter
> >> 90°
> >and held there.
> effortlessly

plaster bandages hardening

>
> >> > > glass-starlitshard
> >> > pierced through the navel
> >> and into her womb
> >giving birth to mirrors
> of a life

re-lived again and again

> >> > > imbedded under muscle
> >> > the ramrod
> >> lover
> >opened the forbidden
> to all eyes

becoming assassins

> >> > > deci-size ID
> >> > tied with titanium wires
> >> of ancient trapezes
> >a swinging suspended pelvis
> looks molded

from smooth pink plastic parts

> >> > > unleashed upon
> >> > arbitrators of destinies
> >> standing in line
> >for dispensed gratifications
> behind the velvet ropes

guarding the freak show

> >> > > unsuspected
> >> > beneath her undergarments.
> >> forgotten
> >.45 calibre hollowpoint.
> is authenticated

synchronized with any anticipations

>
> >R.M.

Morpheal

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Sep 9, 2004, 10:27:21 PM9/9/04

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derek wrote:
>
> poop
deck

R.M.