Request for Beta Readers

[Iruka]

It's been a while (six months or so) since I posted my first story
here, a
one-shot called "When in Rome." Now I need a second set of eyes for
something much longer (15 chapters, some running to more than ten
pages in MS Word) and more serious in tone than my first story.

(I meant to start posting this a lot sooner, but I had this nifty idea
about
pulling in a bunch of elements from DS9 - a series I knew from print
and
Internet sources, but hadn't actually _watched_... which meant that I
had to go back and revise everytime I came to a critical episode that
I hadn't seen yet!)

Being an editor by profession, I'm less worried about mechanics than
about larger story elements. Since my writing method is very
piecemeal,
I'm concerned about having missed obvious holes in the plot, but I've
read
over the thing so many times that I don't suppose I'd be able to spot
them myself.

Any takers?

Iruka
iruka(at)yahoo.com