Eloise pt 1, commentary
wi....@wizvax.methuen.ma.us
In offshoot commentary about my Eloise story,
rml...@zeus.tamu.edu writes:
>See my idea of communing with god(desse)s is to take pleasure in the world. It
>is my theory that if they created the universe (and it wasn't just an accident)
>then if something feels good they MENT it to, and the best way to thank someone
>for a gift is to revel in it.
Amen, broham. As quick as Eloise found what she could accomplish
with her little primary and secondary private parts, she started
reveling in it every chance she got. And continues to do so, to this day.
>Tie into that a theory in the omnipresense of
>divinity, the belief that god(desse)s are everywhere, in everything, or more
>accurately, everything is (at least part of) god(s). SO when you experience
>something you are percieveing something and perception is a form of
>communication and communicating with ones dieties is a holy act.
I agree with you, rml; however, in the story, I intended (besides to
entertain) to show how Eloise's psyche got cross-wired so that a lesser
passion (Jesus) got linked to a greater passion (auto-eroticism). Eloise
had, at best, the same sort of nonmystical fantasy relationship with
Jesus that a Brasilian kid might have with Pele--not religion, just
hero worship. The strong emotional release that Eloise (and Chris,
for that matter) got from anal masturbation and orgasm is the same that
a truly religious person might get from religious practice. I am from
De Ole South, and I have seen enough women experiencing orgasm in
fundamentalist church services to understand what _that_ is all
about, thank you.
So, box score: Eloise, not religious, merely horny and fortunate
enough to find both Jesus and her own asshole at a convenient
nexus; without a sense of sin (for this story, anyway); and
attracted to Chris for reasons of voyeurism and dominance.
Chris, even less religious, lonely and horny, attracted to and
repelled by Eloise at the same time; taking the sumissive role
because it allows her to do the good stuff and internally
blame it on Eloise. Pretty standard top/bottom relationship,
only no ropes.
Thanks to you and others for your thoughtful comments.
averti 131 charges of blasphemy and bad attitude
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