Writing for A.S.B.
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Exile Writes:
>i welcome criticism of all sorts, whether of the sex, the characters,
>or the plot. i suppose the main flaw of my writing is that i get
>bored describing every stroke of a fifteen-minute-long blowjob, and
>sometimes it shows.
Seems to be the largest(no pun intended) problem of writing Erotica is
trying to make the sex "interesting".
Overall you, CTan, Elf, and Averti all make interesting CHARACTERS.
which interest me a LOT more than the n-th description of a someone
going down on each other.
What's more, the sex description are FUN. They have character, too.
Your characters AREN'T (To use Phaedrus's terms, I believe they were)
"knuckle draggers" or "Mouth breathers" (I DO like those terms..:))
which is what keeps me interested.
> i know that writing per se isn't the topic of
>this board, but then what about the writer as top? is creating a
>story like creating a scene? is cecilia tan the biggest literary
>tease on the net?
Heh, actually it depends on what you mean "tease"...:)
actually, There is no "Topic" for this board, only inter-connected
threads.
I think that a good scene, should read well, if you strategically remove
certain items...(Hi F!..only a few more pages to go..:))
Also, why DOESN'T Writing have a place on here. After all, how many people
have been (to a greater or lesser extent) influenced by the "Gor" novels, if
ONLY to the fact it gave them ideas or kept 'em going?
>and furthermore, all of you who want to see more writing just better
>hope i don't get a job or run out of emotional trauma any time soon.
>;-)
Oh, if THAT'S all you're worried about...Well, we could always make up some
emoutional trauma. Lemmeseee....(rummage) Aha!! I still have my "Tom & Jerry
Quic-Cartoon kit"! No Problem!!
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