It's against the war, y'see.
--
BTR
The Glass Marble, mistaking the No. 37 Penpoint for the Four-Holed
Button, pushed it into the Yawning Chasm.
> In his sweet hammock
> The imperialist lies
> Amid fallen leaves
>
> It's against the war, y'see.
The haiku may be terrible, but the commentary is EXCELLENT! More poets
should do this.
Here are some more examples of what is possible through the power of
POEM COMMENTARY!
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Pome:
-----
The slow
morning sun rises
too --- --- but! not
for thee.
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Commentary:
-----------
Is that how that is supposed to go? I haven't read any Hemmingway since
high school. Actually, i think I just read the Cliff's Notes.
-----
Pome:
-----
I like
to eat
bacon
for breakfast be-
-cause
I
like
b
a and
c bacon is
o good for breakfast
n
and have
I to bacon
like for
breakfast
so
you should come by for
b r e a k f a s t
and we can have
B*A*C*O*N
because I like bacon for
breakfast
and I think you will
like it so you
should come by
for breakfast and
have bacon
because you will like it.
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Commentary:
-----------
This makes sense.
-jwgh
--
"When then meatbot revolution comes, you will be the first against the
grill of the House of the Future's indoor barbecue."
--Brian 'Jarai' Chase on alt.religion.kibology 3 September 2002
> In his sweet hammock
> The imperialist lies
> Amid fallen leaves
>
> It's against the war, y'see.
>
Yeah, like the "fallen leaves" are Viet Nam and the "hammock" is the WTO!
Heavy!!!
>In his sweet hammock
>The imperialist lies
>Amid fallen leaves
>
>It's against the war, y'see.
In a bombed out building
The despot's sons lie
Amid burning rubble
It's for the the war, y'see.
Ding Dong,
The sons of the bitch are dead.
One Ace left
It's against Saddam, y'see?
We do the Dance of Joy!!!
Professor Emeritus of Andorran Literature at Columbia University,
Dr. John Druid, THC
> In his sweet hammock
> The imperialist lies
> Amid fallen leaves
>
> It's against the war, y'see.
Which war? The war is OVER d00d! And I heard that they killed the
Hussein boys AGAIN today, so you can't try to pretend that the war
is still on! Why do you hate AMERICA?
--
The trouble is, Queensland gets branded as being part of Australia.
-- Sir Joh Bjelke-Petersen http://beable.com/
Dogs don't know
it's not bacon!
Dogs don't know
it's not bacon
Dogs don't know
it's not bacon
Dogs don't know
it's not bacon!
Dogs don't know
it's not bacon!
Dogs don't know
it's not bacon
Dogs don't know
it's not bacon!
Dogs don't know
it's not bacon!
Dogs don't know
it's not bacon!
Dogs don't know
it's not bacon!
Dogs don't know
it's not bacon!
In the spring rain.
0 0 o * O
o o o
_ ___ _ -__ __
_---_ _ __ __ ---
Knee jerk analysis: the Trvth, like a cured meat substitute,
is best when it's drained on a paper towel. The penguin
is the personification of Death.
Wmst.
N. Gergen
--
"You can pick what...
...e-mails you wanna see first in your mailbox!"
>wol...@uchicago.edu (Ben Wolfson) writes:
>
>> In his sweet hammock
>> The imperialist lies
>> Amid fallen leaves
>>
>> It's against the war, y'see.
>
>Which war?
I think he wishes it was WWI, that's the last time Chicago won a World
Series.
>And I heard that they killed the
>Hussein boys AGAIN today,
Oooh, can we bring them back to life, so we can kill them a few more
times?
>Why do you hate AMERICA?
If I had to live in a jerk-water-burgh like Chicago, I'd probably hate
America, too.
Principal Owner of the New York Yankees,
John Druid, III
> Knee jerk analysis: the Trvth, like a cured meat substitute,
> is best when it's drained on a paper towel. The penguin
> is the personification of Death.
Commentary: This makes sense.
--
--Paula
"I have often claimed that, if Arabic is indeed the Language
of God, then God has Very Bad Sinus Trouble. If he also has
a fondness for chocolate, then Paula Toblerone would be
practical proof that Chyx were made in God's Image." --John Salt