Is group meiN itni acchi GHazleiN aur nazmeiN pesh ki jaati haiN ki apni GHazal pesh karne ki himmat bohat mushkil se hi hoti hai. Khair koshish kar raha hooN, shayed pasand aa jaaye. Apne comments mujhe zaroor bhejeN, intezaar rahega.
To peshe-khidmat hai ....meri ek nayi GHazal.
------------- hasrat-e-deedar se kyoN, bezaar hue jaate haiN mana ki unki nazrooN se, inkaar hue jaate haiN
unke har inkaar meiN ab, shiddat pehle si nahiN pighal jayega patthar yeh, aasaar hue jaate haiN
the to yadooN meiN guzarne, zeest ke lamhe magar teri yadooN se woh hi, dushwaar hue jaate haiN
shadaab the jo vasl meiN, ek phool ke maanind GHam-e-judai meiN yaar ki, beemar hue jaate haiN
woh aate haiN¹ sada aayi, dile-betaab to jis dam khizaaN jaise the ruKH unke, bahaar hue jaate haiN
pehle jahaN maa¹soomiat se, hoti thi rabt-o-raah tija'rate-dil ke ab woh, bazaar hue jaate haiN
rahe hum bhagte hardam, haqeeqat-e-zindagaani se har moD par us se hi, do-chaar hue jaate haiN
kal chaand to ek baar hi, dekha tha phir ANIS KHafa kyoN mujhse mere, sarkaar hue jaate haiN -------------
Shukriya, Anis Khan
anis_k...@hotmail.com ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Anis Khan, E-mail: anis_k...@hotmail.com
ao, dil ke jazbaat ko, phir kureda jaye machalti hui, shayed koi, GHazal nikle
>Is group meiN itni acchi GHazleiN aur nazmeiN pesh ki jaati haiN ki apni >GHazal pesh karne ki himmat bohat mushkil se hi hoti hai. Khair koshish >kar raha hooN, shayed pasand aa jaaye. Apne comments mujhe zaroor bhejeN, >intezaar rahega.
>To peshe-khidmat hai ....meri ek nayi GHazal.
>------------- >hasrat-e-deedar se kyoN, bezaar hue jaate haiN >mana ki unki nazrooN se, inkaar hue jaate haiN
>unke har inkaar meiN ab, shiddat pehle si nahiN >pighal jayega patthar yeh, aasaar hue jaate haiN
>the to yadooN meiN guzarne, zeest ke lamhe magar >teri yadooN se woh hi, dushwaar hue jaate haiN
>shadaab the jo vasl meiN, ek phool ke maanind >GHam-e-judai meiN yaar ki, beemar hue jaate haiN
>woh aate haiN¹ sada aayi, dile-betaab to jis dam >khizaaN jaise the ruKH unke, bahaar hue jaate haiN
>pehle jahaN maa¹soomiat se, hoti thi rabt-o-raah >tija'rate-dil ke ab woh, bazaar hue jaate haiN
>rahe hum bhagte hardam, haqeeqat-e-zindagaani se >har moD par us se hi, do-chaar hue jaate haiN
>kal chaand to ek baar hi, dekha tha phir ANIS >KHafa kyoN mujhse mere, sarkaar hue jaate haiN >-------------
>Shukriya, >Anis Khan
ek shayari se thee roti kamaane kee ummeed par ab lagta hai berozgaar hue jaate hai.n
apne baare mein kuch aisa khayal aata hai aap kee ghazal paR ke, Anis Saahib. Aap kee sohbat mein hum se ko kaun poochega, is baat ka fikr lag gaya hai ab. Bahut hee achi ghazal likhi hai aapne! Likhte rahiyega, huzoor. regards, Jay Shergill
> >Is group meiN itni acchi GHazleiN aur nazmeiN pesh ki jaati haiN ki apni > >GHazal pesh karne ki himmat bohat mushkil se hi hoti hai. Khair koshish > >kar raha hooN, shayed pasand aa jaaye. Apne comments mujhe zaroor bhejeN, > >intezaar rahega.
> >To peshe-khidmat hai ....meri ek nayi GHazal.
> >------------- > >hasrat-e-deedar se kyoN, bezaar hue jaate haiN > >mana ki unki nazrooN se, inkaar hue jaate haiN
> >unke har inkaar meiN ab, shiddat pehle si nahiN > >pighal jayega patthar yeh, aasaar hue jaate haiN
> >the to yadooN meiN guzarne, zeest ke lamhe magar > >teri yadooN se woh hi, dushwaar hue jaate haiN
> >shadaab the jo vasl meiN, ek phool ke maanind > >GHam-e-judai meiN yaar ki, beemar hue jaate haiN
> >woh aate haiN¹ sada aayi, dile-betaab to jis dam > >khizaaN jaise the ruKH unke, bahaar hue jaate haiN
> >pehle jahaN maa¹soomiat se, hoti thi rabt-o-raah > >tija'rate-dil ke ab woh, bazaar hue jaate haiN
> >rahe hum bhagte hardam, haqeeqat-e-zindagaani se > >har moD par us se hi, do-chaar hue jaate haiN
> >kal chaand to ek baar hi, dekha tha phir ANIS > >KHafa kyoN mujhse mere, sarkaar hue jaate haiN > >-------------
> >Shukriya, > >Anis Khan
> ek shayari se thee roti kamaane kee ummeed > par ab lagta hai berozgaar hue jaate hai.n
dil to chhu-tay huay yeH ashaar, hum ab to ashaar-e-ANIS keH talabgar huay jaate haiN
K.
> apne baare mein kuch aisa khayal aata hai aap kee ghazal paR ke, Anis Saahib. > Aap kee sohbat mein hum se ko kaun poochega, is baat ka fikr lag gaya hai ab. > Bahut hee achi ghazal likhi hai aapne! Likhte rahiyega, huzoor. > regards, > Jay Shergill