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Anil Kala

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Apr 1, 2013, 10:42:47 AM4/1/13
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Mirza Ghalib ka celebrated she'r hai

maut ka aik din muaiyyan hai
niiNd kyuN raat bar nahiiN aati


kya is she'r ka yahi maane hai ke maut ka KHauf is qadar hai ke iske maare niiNd raat bhar nahiiN aati! agar ye baat hai to meri samajh se Mirza Ghalib bhaari GHalti kar rahe haiN. bhalaa muat ke Khauf se kaun apni niiNd gavaaN rahaa hai?

dar-asal ye sawaal Yudhister ke Yaksh ko diye jawaab se puuri tarah ulTaa chal rahaa hai. ham samjhte haiN ke maut aani zaruur hai lekiN meri nahiiN kisii aur ki aur ghoRe bech kar rozaaana so jaate haiN. shaayad sirf woh log jiNhe maut ka ilm definitive hai wahi niiNd se mahruum rahte hai maslan woh qaidi jisko saaza e maut confirm ho gayi hai ya phir koi aisaa mariiz jo terminally biimaar ho!

aam aadmi to yaqiinan hi maut ko apne nazdiik bilkul bhi nahiiN dekhtaa ..

rpat...@yahoo.com

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Apr 1, 2013, 8:11:45 PM4/1/13
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janaab-e-Anil saahib;

meri haqeer raaye meiN, aap is she'r ko kuchh Ghalat samajh rahe haiN. huzoor, yahaaN raat bhar neeNd na aane ka sabab "maut ka Khauf" naheeN hai bal-k "maut ka intezaar" hai!

Please read the she'r again in the light of this remark!

albatta, yahaaN aek dilchasp nazariya aur bhi hai --- voh yeh k agar hamaari maut ke liye "din" ka vaqt mu'aiyyan hai to phir neeNd bhalaa "raat" ko kyooN naheeN aati? ;)

du'aa-go,
Raj Kumar

vij...@gmail.com

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Apr 2, 2013, 10:13:46 AM4/2/13
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woh aae ghar meN hamaare Khuda kii qudrat hai...)

Khush-aamded Raj sahib. Anil sahib yaqiinan mubarakbaad ke haqdaar haiN ki unkii 'azaan' ne aap jaise 'nammazii' ko jagaa diia:-)

ummiid hai aap Khairiiat se hoNge.

Anil sahib ke siwaal pe aap kii dilchasp wazaahat kaa shukriia. agar apnii koii naii ghazal bhii sunaa deN to navaazish.

Best regards,

Vijay


rpat...@yahoo.com

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Apr 2, 2013, 7:50:41 PM4/2/13
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Khair-maqdam ke liye shukr-guzaar huuN, Vijay saahib, go k tabii'at in dinoN kuchh digar-gooN si rehti hai! :(

ba-har-haal, aap ki is mahabbat-aamez farmaa'ish par, maiN an-qareeb hi apni aek nayee Ghazal aap ki Khidmat meiN zaroor pesh karooN ga!

du'aa-go,
Raj Kumar

Naseer

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Apr 16, 2013, 7:16:51 PM4/16/13
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muHtaram Raj Kumar SaaHib, aadaab-o-tasliimaat.

Vijay SaaHib has welcomed you back into ALUP with words that can not
be improved upon, since who can beat Ghalib's "andaaz-i-bayaaN"?
But...

dil se jo baat nikaltii hai, asar rakhtii hai
par nahiiN, taaqat-i-parvaaz magar rakhtii hai

So, mere "dil kii baat" apnii parvaaz meN shiiraaz jaa pahuNchii hai
jahaaN ke ek baashinde ne merii tarjumaanii kuchh in alfaaz meN kii
hai.

guftah buudam cho biyaa'ii Gham-i-dil baa tu bi-goyam
chih bi-goyam kih Gham az dil bi-ravad chuuN tu biyaa'ii

zaahir hai maiN aap ko kabhii "tuu" kah kar muxaatib ho nahiiN saktaa,
is liye

maiN ne kahaa thaa jab aap aa'eN ge to apne dil ke Gham aap ko
bataa'uuN gaa
ab kyaa bataa'uuN? kih dil ke saare Gham chale jaate haiN jab aap aa
jaate haiN

...aur aap aa ga'e haiN!

xush-aamaded, Raj Kumar SaaHib.
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