Basically, magic realism is the depiction of everyday things in an
unrealistic manner, describing commonplace objects and events in such a
way as to make them seem surreal, magical, or fantastic.
I'll give it a go... hmmm...
With a rush of air, the smouldering embers flared, erupted in
brilliance, and their slow crawl became a brief gallop, a short burst of
speed along the white shaft which they traversed. The man's fleshy face
cracked open, the fume-reeking stick moved away, and a sudden geyser of
foetid smoke blasted from the depths of his body. Following shortly on
its tail came a tremendous pounding of spongy flesh and ripping cords,
and he choked out a few more minutes of his shortening life, which were
chased away by the teasing wind of entropy.
Bugger it, that'll do. An alternative to "He took a drag of his
cigarette, exhaled, and coughed several times."
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Semi on-topic...does anybody here like Magritte? I particularly like "Menaced Assassin"
and "Pleasure".
> I'll give it a go... hmmm...
>
> With a rush of air, the smouldering embers flared, erupted in
> brilliance, and their slow crawl became a brief gallop, a short burst of
> speed along the white shaft which they traversed. The man's fleshy face
> cracked open, the fume-reeking stick moved away, and a sudden geyser of
> foetid smoke blasted from the depths of his body. Following shortly on
> its tail came a tremendous pounding of spongy flesh and ripping cords,
> and he choked out a few more minutes of his shortening life, which were
> chased away by the teasing wind of entropy.
>
> Bugger it, that'll do. An alternative to "He took a drag of his
> cigarette, exhaled, and coughed several times."
Interesting. Sounds kinda like a pastiche.
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> = = "The funny thing is... on the =
> = From the keyboard of = outside, I was an honest man, =
> = James J. Dominguez = straight as an arrow. I had =
> = de...@mynx.wow.aust.com = to come to prison to be a =
> = IRCNet: DexX ICQ: 10419916 = crook." - Andy Dufresne, =
> = = The Shawshank Redemption =
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