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`una

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Nov 8, 2009, 2:16:01 AM11/8/09
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Bad Goth Poetry

ooooh fuck
i am so alone
the bats doth cry
as my old bones moan
no love for me
a shriveled crone
under the tree i sit
and crave a bone.

Fuck! I forgot the black rose.

Dark Phoenix

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Nov 8, 2009, 12:33:21 PM11/8/09
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"`una" <una...@nettrip.org> wrote in message
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And blood. You forgot blood. And graveyards.


--
Laurie Brown, Dark Phoenix
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"To destroy the Western tradition of independent thought, it is not
necessary to burn books. All we have to do is leave them unread for a couple
of generations."
--Robert Maynard Hutchens.


Fnordy!

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Nov 8, 2009, 7:22:14 PM11/8/09
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On Nov 8, 12:33 pm, "Dark Phoenix" <dark_phoe...@netw.com> wrote:
> "`una" <una...@nettrip.org> wrote in message
>
> news:hq7is6-...@abyss.ninehells.com...
>
> > Bad Goth Poetry
>
> > ooooh fuck
> > i am so alone
> > the bats doth cry
> > as my old bones moan
> > no love for me
> > a shriveled crone
> > under the tree i sit
> > and crave a bone.

the black rose makes me bleed
so i lie prone
i can't call for help
on the telephone
and no one hears
my dying groan
and then they bury me
under a stone
but the grave's not mine
it's just a loan.


>
> > Fuck! I forgot the black rose.
>
> And blood. You forgot blood. And graveyards.
>

There you go.

`una

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Nov 8, 2009, 9:02:23 PM11/8/09
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"Dark Phoenix" wrote:

> "`una" wrote in message

> > Fuck! I forgot the black rose.
>
> And blood. You forgot blood. And graveyards.

The graveyards are implied, but it would clearly be worse
if I had gone for the direct statement.

`una - bad at writing bad poetry *hand*staple*forehead*

Fnordy!

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Nov 9, 2009, 9:24:19 AM11/9/09
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On Nov 8, 7:22 pm, "Fnordy!" <fnordik...@yahoo.com> wrote:
> On Nov 8, 12:33 pm, "Dark Phoenix" <dark_phoe...@netw.com> wrote:
>
> > "`una" <una...@nettrip.org> wrote in message
>
> >news:hq7is6-...@abyss.ninehells.com...
>
> > > Bad Goth Poetry
>
> > > ooooh fuck
> > > i am so alone
> > > the bats doth cry
> > > as my old bones moan
> > > no love for me
> > > a shriveled crone
> > > under the tree i sit
> > > and crave a bone.
>
> the black rose makes me bleed
> so i lie prone
> i can't call for help
> on the telephone
> and no one hears
> my dying groan
> and then they bury me
> under a stone
> but the grave's not mine
> it's just a loan.

so i can't stay
the grave isn't my own
and for my crimes
i must atone
so my corpse is dug up
by some worker drone
and over the graveyard fence
i'm thrown
where i crumble to dust
like stale old scone
and away by the cruel north wind
i'm blown.

oonh

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Nov 11, 2009, 11:22:45 PM11/11/09
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deeps drags darks dranks
makes a munder and manx
splunth sploonth george
folly a teorge
murder master martyr thee
insert spoon into cheese


oonh

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