Cottage Creep - Chapter 19 - End
ugu...@nowhere.net
Ron returned to the hospital and was sent again to the waiting
room. He was informed that visiting hours were over and that he would
not likely be able to see his brother until in the morning. It was
suggested that he should go home and rest, but he had no home here, no
place to go. So, he sat in the waiting room and did what the room was
designed for, he waited.
After a couple of hours he was roused from a doze even though
he had not realized he had fallen asleep. "It's done," the old woman
told him. "I have my revenge, you have your brother. Now, take him
away from here and don't either of you come back." With that she
simply vanished. Ron would have been deeply disturbed by this site,
but nothing would ever likely disturb his sensibilities again after
the last few days here. Either his nerves had been converted to
steel, or they had been burned away, he was not sure. Either way,
nothing would ever shock him again, or at least, that was what he
thought.
The next morning, a nurse called to him from the doorway,
waking him. "You can go see your brother now," she informed him.
He entered his brothers room and was only mildly surprised to
see that he had recovered at least most of his youth if not all.
"You're looking great, Tom. You ready to check out of here?"
"Why yes, kind suh. Do be a gentlemen and help me now if you
would be so kind."
Bear
Thanks again for a great story!
ugu...@nowhere.net
>Oh wow, man, this was great. I love the twist at the end :)
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>Thanks again for a great story!
Thanks Bear. And I thank everyone else who offers encourgement and
support while I "sharpen my pencil" here awaiting the visitation of a
perfect story.
Take care of the cubs for it is they who shall enherit the forest. :)
Lesmond
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>Oh wow, man, this was great. I love the twist at the end :)
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>Thanks again for a great story!
I concur. But it shouldn't be the end! Then what? THEN WHAT?
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I got a feeling something went wrong and now I own a blind camel.
Jules W.
"Why yes, kind suh. Do be a gentlemen and help me now if you
would be so kind.">
Bravo! Looking forward to the next one.
Wow.
Jules W.
ugu...@nowhere.net
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>On 28 Feb 2006 08:14:01 -0800, Bear wrote:
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>>Oh wow, man, this was great. I love the twist at the end :)
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>>Thanks again for a great story!
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>I concur. But it shouldn't be the end! Then what? THEN WHAT?
Why, suh, surely a kind gentleman as yourself would like another
story.. :)
ugu...@nowhere.net
Thanks, working on ideas for a new story even now. Not sure about the
currently unnamed one, a fragment of which I posted earlier, a bit
different from what I normaly write, but hey, the idea here is to
practice my writing and try to diversify it, so who knows.. maybe that
is the one I should pursue. If not, then another idea will surely
come soon. :)
SilverTabby
"Lesmond" <les...@verizon.net> wrote in message
news:yrfzbaqirevmbaar...@130.81.64.196...
> On 28 Feb 2006 08:14:01 -0800, Bear wrote:
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> I concur. But it shouldn't be the end! Then what? THEN WHAT?
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I'm so glad I'm not the only one that thought this.
Great story. I've even got my son reading your stories. I need to google all
of Cottage Creep for him to read.
~Lissa
Give a person a fish and you feed them for a day;
teach that person to use the Internet and they won't bother you for weeks.
Lesmond
Well, of course! But I am a lady, rather than a gentleman.
I always look forward to your stories.
ugu...@nowhere.net
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>On Wed, 01 Mar 2006 17:09:37 GMT, ugu...@nowhere.net wrote:
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>>On Wed, 01 Mar 2006 14:52:34 GMT, "Lesmond" <les...@verizon.net>
>>wrote:
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>>>On 28 Feb 2006 08:14:01 -0800, Bear wrote:
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>>>>Oh wow, man, this was great. I love the twist at the end :)
>>>>
>>>>Thanks again for a great story!
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>>>I concur. But it shouldn't be the end! Then what? THEN WHAT?
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>>Why, suh, surely a kind gentleman as yourself would like another
>>story.. :)
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>Well, of course! But I am a lady, rather than a gentleman.
>
ooopsss!!!! sorry. :)