Sonic Fights RObotnik what did you think?
SONIC FAN
Ok so some people like this story and some people don't.
What did you think of it send me an email at
sonic...@yahoo.com
PS - I've started writing a sequel. cool ;)
MachHedge
Oh, good. I'm getting bored.
Mach H. Hedgehog,
Pointless thingy of the un-determined amount of time:
"You DID enjoy messing your pants?" -Andrew Lenell
Zuckuss199
>Ok so some people like this story and some people don't.
>What did you think of it send me an email at
>sonic...@yahoo.com
>
>PS - I've started writing a sequel. cool ;)
NO!!!!!!!!!
Jose Solano
s1...@epix.net
SONIC FAN wrote:
>
> Ok so some people like this story and some people don't.
> What did you think of it send me an email at
> sonic...@yahoo.com
>
> PS - I've started writing a sequel. cool ;)
*SCREAM* No sequel, ohgod, please, NO SEQUEL!
Sorry, but the first one was enough.. too many nonSonic, nonMobius
references, and the characters were all OUT of character.
A.DH.
Gen Fluke
SONIC FAN wrote:
>
> Ok so some people like this story and some people don't.
> What did you think of it send me an email at
> sonic...@yahoo.com
>
> PS - I've started writing a sequel. cool ;)
You write a friggin sequel and i'll staple a green day cd to your ass..
-Gen
TimeStones
>> PS - I've started writing a sequel. cool ;)
Yay! I can't wait! (I don't want to see the story, I just want to see Mach MST
it again!)
Quote of the week:
Uhmmm.... I'll get back to you on it!
**** **** * * ***
** * TimeStones* * *
** *** *** ***
* *** -Warrior of time and all time realities.
Liam
Gen Fluke wrote in message <3595EB...@bellsouth.net>...
>SONIC FAN wrote:
>>
>> Ok so some people like this story and some people don't.
>> What did you think of it send me an email at
>> sonic...@yahoo.com
>>
>> PS - I've started writing a sequel. cool ;)
>
>
>You write a friggin sequel and i'll staple a green day cd to your ass..
>-Gen
That's a waste a staple.
Liam Slater
LSG...@MSN.com
The CD deserves it though.
Sonic,"You're new bread of badnik may be TOUGH... But I can still take them
out!"
Robotnik,"Oh, I REALISE that... That's why I've brought HIM!"
Sonic,"KNUCKLES!"
Robotnik,"BEHOLD THE NEW METALLIX!"
MachHedge
>*SCREAM* No sequel, ohgod, please, NO SEQUEL!
*Kicks A.DH.* No! LET him! I want to read it!!
>Sorry, but the first one was enough.. too many nonSonic, nonMobius
>references, and the characters were all OUT of character.
Yes! It's perfect!
MachHedge
>NO!!!!!!!!!
YES!!!!!!!
MachHedge
>You write a friggin sequel and i'll staple a green day cd to your ass..
>-Gen
Gen, no. let him. It'll be great!
MachHedge
>Yay! I can't wait! (I don't want to see the story, I just want to see Mach
>MST
>it again!)
you bet!
Alessandro Sanasi
On 26 Jun 98, sonic...@yahoo.com (SONIC FAN) wrote:
> Ok so some people like this story and some people don't.
> What did you think of it send me an email at
> sonic...@yahoo.com
I'm sorry to disappoint you, but you will probably have a *VERY* hard time
to find even *ONE* who liked that particular story... it was simply too
off-character, and too sloppily written.
Bye
Alessandro
---
You get what anyone gets. You get a lifetime.
David Bulmer
In article <199806281921...@ladder01.news.aol.com>, MachHedge
<mach...@aol.com> writes
>>*SCREAM* No sequel, ohgod, please, NO SEQUEL!
>
>*Kicks A.DH.* No! LET him! I want to read it!!
>
>>Sorry, but the first one was enough.. too many nonSonic, nonMobius
>>references, and the characters were all OUT of character.
>
>Yes! It's perfect!
>
feeling pretty bad about it. Now this isn't a defense, as I didn't like
the Fanfic either. Rather, it is to point out to the author of the
Fanfic where he/she went wrong. Now, we all know that the flames have
been about plotholes, way too much Greenday on Mobius and general
"sloppiness" in the writing. But it is my belief SonicFan or whoever
wrote this, (I think it was SonicFan...) that you would have escaped
these flames almost completely by doing one simple thing: Not claiming
it to be the best Sonic Fanfic ever. Anyone who does this is instantly
classed as an idiot, and their Fanfic is read with scorn. Quite what
elements of the story did you believe classed it as the "best" Sonic
Fanfic ever? So far you haven't even defended yourself. And please, no
flames. We've had enough of them.
--
David Bulmer
David Bulmer
In article <6whej...@deco.franken.de>, Alessandro Sanasi
<ty...@deco.franken.de> writes
>On 26 Jun 98, sonic...@yahoo.com (SONIC FAN) wrote:
>
>> Ok so some people like this story and some people don't.
>> What did you think of it send me an email at
>> sonic...@yahoo.com
>
>I'm sorry to disappoint you, but you will probably have a *VERY* hard time
>to find even *ONE* who liked that particular story... it was simply too
>off-character, and too sloppily written.
the Fanfic may have noticed I quoted the word "sloppiness". I wasn't
actually quoting it from Alessandro, as I read this post afterwards, I
was writing down what I thought our general opinion was, and I put the
word in speech-marks because I thought it might not be accepted as a
real word. But now someone else has used exactly the same word, and that
someone is the bloke who knows exactly what makes a Fanfic good. So it
seems to me that's SonicFan's main downfall - sloppy writing (including
plotholes).
Sloppy.
Sloppy sloppy sloppy
Sloppy sloppy
Sloppy sloppy sloppy
... And now "sloppy" just sounds silly. *B^D
--
David Bulmer
David Bulmer
In article <199806281922...@ladder01.news.aol.com>, MachHedge
<mach...@aol.com> writes
>>You write a friggin sequel and i'll staple a green day cd to your ass..
>>-Gen
>
>Gen, no. let him. It'll be great!
>
--
David Bulmer
MachHedge
> I agree, let him. I want to read the MST. *B^)
Finally somthing I'm good at, Eh?
MONDARES JASON C
I agree. Although the author's no Dan Drazen (no offense to either of
you), it's SonicFAN's fanfic and his/her imagination. Let's let fanfic
be what it should be: whatever the author wants it to be.
-+Warp+-
You are only limited by your imagination.
Jeff Read
Alessandro Sanasi wrote:
> I'm sorry to disappoint you, but you will probably have a *VERY* hard time
> to find even *ONE* who liked that particular story... it was simply too
> off-character, and too sloppily written.
Alessandro... your frankness has become legendary. :) Whether that's a
bug or a feature has yet to be decided... but I think it's a little of
both. :)
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David Bulmer
In article <3597FE...@edmonds.ctc.edu>, MONDARES JASON C
<MOND...@edmonds.ctc.edu> writes
by doing it a lot. That's obvious. So yes, let SonicFan do as many
Fanfics as he/she likes (we don't have to read them, right?) but the
point is, SonicFan, don't put "This is the best Sonic Fanfic ever!" at
the beginning. If you use this simple rule, we'll take you more
seriously.
And always remember what would and would not be on Mobius.
Greenday, for instance, would not be on Mobius. Certain things are also
inappropriate, like the whole IRC thing. Sonic and Sally would not do
that. And if they would, we wouldn't hear about it. Some aspects of life
need editing out, and that's one of them.
If you write your stories consistantly and following those basic
rules, you'll be taken much more seriously. Also, judging by your first
story, it seems to me it would help you to decide what the end of the
story will be before you start. You seem to be making up the story as
you go along - by deciding on the ending first, you'll be able to make
sure what you're writing in between is relevant. That's not the way most
writers work, but it seems to me at the moment that it would work for
you.
--
David Bulmer
s1...@epix.net
> *Kicks A.DH.* No! LET him! I want to read it!!
You kick femmes? You disgust me o.o I wanna read the upcoming MSTied
story, but I don't want to see the story itself. The concept of a sequel
makes me rather ill.
> Mach H. Hedgehog,
> Pointless thingy of the un-determined amount of time:
>
> "You DID enjoy messing your pants?" -Andrew Lenell
o/ It's a straaaaaaaaaaange strange world. o/
Aechla DarkHaven
RazJMastrs
>I agree. Although the author's no Dan Drazen (no
>offense to either of you), it's SonicFAN's fanfic and
>his/her imagination. Let's let fanfic be what it should
>be: whatever the author wants it to be.
I agree.. to a point. If the author claims that their
works are so extravagant that the readers'll be left
in awe, then I won't respect them. Personally, I
don't even think that SONICFAN is paying any
attention to any of our posts, even the kind ones.
I've seen no responses from him/her, have any of
you?
Bulmer's right, far as the 'If you don't say it's godly
then people will understand' view goes. Still, don't
forget that, -sometimes-, these boasters reveal
themselves as lamers later on, which leads to
pain and frustration..
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Mark Palenik
s1...@epix.net wrote:
Hey, 1969, do you speak French. It's a serous question. I'm not trying
to insult you or anything.
Mark Palenik
Alessandro Sanasi wrote:
> On 29 Jun 98, bit...@geocities.com (Jeff Read) wrote:
>
> > > I'm sorry to disappoint you, but you will probably have a *VERY* hard time
> > > to find even *ONE* who liked that particular story... it was simply too
> > > off-character, and too sloppily written.
>
> > Alessandro... your frankness has become legendary. :) Whether that's a
> > bug or a feature has yet to be decided... but I think it's a little of
> > both. :)
>
> Oh, come on... can you *REALLY* say that there was _anything_ in that
> particular story which was worth reading, while keeping a honest face? ;)
>
> I usually keep my mouth shut (except when being asked directly), but this
> story simply was too awful. Totally ridiculous plot, total out-of-
> character, lots of pointless cameos and references to non-Sonic stuff,
> more plotholes than anyone could count...
>
> Bye
>
> Alessandro
> ---
> You get what anyone gets. You get a lifetime.
Ha! Usualy keep your mouth shut. Remember me and that barely Sonic
related....ah, never mind. Luis blew the whole thing out of proportion. It was
back. in January before Luis discovered his true (relatively) good natured self.
s1...@epix.net
Do I speak French? No I don't. I'm English with a smattering of
Pennsylvania Dutch and German, or something close to that. I'm a
beginning in learning Spanish tho.. ;)
Aech
Sparrow
>Oh, come on... can you *REALLY* say that there was _anything_ in that
>particular story which was worth reading, while keeping a honest face?
>;)
*keeping an honest face*
It was fairly good for comic relief, I think.
David Bulmer
In article <199806302250...@ladder03.news.aol.com>, RazJMastrs
<razjm...@aol.com> writes
>In article <3597FE...@edmonds.ctc.edu>, MONDARES JASON C
><MOND...@edmonds.ctc.edu> writes:
>
>>I agree. Although the author's no Dan Drazen (no
>>offense to either of you), it's SonicFAN's fanfic and
>>his/her imagination. Let's let fanfic be what it should
>>be: whatever the author wants it to be.
>
>I agree.. to a point. If the author claims that their
>works are so extravagant that the readers'll be left
>in awe, then I won't respect them.
you say your story is the best Sonic Fanfic in the Universe, when it is
clearly.. Well... Quite, uhm.. Bad, then we're not going to respect you
enough to open our minds towards enjoying it.
> Personally, I
>don't even think that SONICFAN is paying any
>attention to any of our posts, even the kind ones.
>I've seen no responses from him/her, have any of
>you?
The only ones I have seen have been telling us all how much we
enjoyed Sonic Fights Robotnik, which.. Well is just a lie, really.
>
>Bulmer's right,
Woohoo!
>far as the 'If you don't say it's godly
>then people will understand' view goes. Still, don't
>forget that, -sometimes-, these boasters reveal
>themselves as lamers later on, which leads to
>pain and frustration..
I agree, but that's what I was trying to avoid. By getting him
in the habit of not saying he's the best writer in the known Universe
when clearly this is false, I wondered whether this would deter him from
future lamer actions. Hey, it's worth a shot. *B^)
So, don't exaggerate your skills to us, SonicFan. Although
having said that, it isn't just that, there were a lot of genuine
mistakes and bad points to your Fanfics, please try to work on them. And
perhaps have some good, or acceptable, parts in-between them?
--
David Bulmer
RazJMastrs
In article <7l29PKAj9Wm1IwA$@bulmers.demon.co.uk>, David Bulmer
<da...@bulmers.demon.co.uk> writes:
>>Personally, I don't even think that SONICFAN is
>>paying any attention to any of our posts, even the
>>kind ones. I've seen no responses from him/her,
>>have any of you?
> The only ones I have seen have been telling
>us all how much we enjoyed Sonic Fights Robotnik,
>which.. Well is just a lie, really.
That's all I've seen as well. Who -else- is reminded
of that Snorks-loving fruit?
Alessandro Sanasi
On 29 Jun 98, bit...@geocities.com (Jeff Read) wrote:
> > I'm sorry to disappoint you, but you will probably have a *VERY* hard time
> > to find even *ONE* who liked that particular story... it was simply too
> > off-character, and too sloppily written.
> Alessandro... your frankness has become legendary. :) Whether that's a
> bug or a feature has yet to be decided... but I think it's a little of
> both. :)
Oh, come on... can you *REALLY* say that there was _anything_ in that
particular story which was worth reading, while keeping a honest face? ;)
I usually keep my mouth shut (except when being asked directly), but this
David Bulmer
In article <199807010055...@ladder03.news.aol.com>, RazJMastrs
<razjm...@aol.com> writes
>In article <7l29PKAj9Wm1IwA$@bulmers.demon.co.uk>, David Bulmer
><da...@bulmers.demon.co.uk> writes:
>
>>>Personally, I don't even think that SONICFAN is
>>>paying any attention to any of our posts, even the
>>>kind ones. I've seen no responses from him/her,
>>>have any of you?
>> The only ones I have seen have been telling
>>us all how much we enjoyed Sonic Fights Robotnik,
>>which.. Well is just a lie, really.
>
>That's all I've seen as well. Who -else- is reminded
>of that Snorks-loving fruit?
infestation but I don't remember who it was. And I mean how much
Greenday can any one person stand??!
--
David Bulmer
Jeff Read
Alessandro Sanasi wrote:
> Oh, come on... can you *REALLY* say that there was _anything_ in that
> particular story which was worth reading, while keeping a honest face? ;)
Yes, there was.
The MST's. :)
Mark Palenik
Solly n'Hedgy wrote:
> s1...@epix.net a 馗rit dans le message <3599DA...@epix.net>...
> Not not It's ME who live in France !!!!!!! In this NG !!! :b
>
> Solly
Well, I know that.
Solly n'Hedgy
Solly n'Hedgy
Yasha Rris
>> Oh, come on... can you *REALLY* say that there was _anything_ in that
>> particular story which was worth reading, while keeping a honest face? ;)
<Keeeping a straight face>
While I could go on and on about
the horrible things, lets focus now
on the good things about Sonic
Fights Robotnik. It had -one- good
thing in it's original form, one thing
that had a lot in common with the
Lost World. It ended. There is
a god, because that story ennnded...
<Runs off, back into lurking mode>
~Miyasha