http://www.scribd.com/people/documents/13344987-jack-r-dunn
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least once a month, so if you like it, subscribe, there will be more.
Comments are always welcome.
Thanks,
Jack
I read the first story on the page. It is obvious that you can write,
though a bit on the derivative side, and the story does not seem to me to
have a point - just a sexual fantasy. It also contains an incorrect
spelling of velodrome. (Velo as in velocity). Get a better spell checker.
Regards, John
Hi Jack.
I read "Christmas in the Kush" (I picked the shortest story as I am at
work). Too short to have a definite opinion, but it is well-written
and kind of incisive, although it could use some more pages to make it
really memorable. Not a flaw, this one, by the way.
Marco