Bobby
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Bobby's Poetry Page - Home of the FAQ
for ALT.ARTS.POETRY.URBAN
http://www.prengineers.com/poetry
Bobby's Political Page
http://home.earthlink.net/~jordanr
Mark Aldiss <cwm...@bogfoot.com> wrote in message
news:hYa04.1512$s5.23967@wards...
How about commenting on some of these poems. This ain't a one way street
you know.
Vikash
Bobby wrote in message <81rjag$bem$1...@holly.prod.itd.earthlink.net>...
>Not bad. could be broken up into stanzas in my opinion.
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>Bobby
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>Bobby's Poetry Page - Home of the FAQ
>for ALT.ARTS.POETRY.URBAN
>http://www.prengineers.com/poetry
>Bobby's Political Page
>http://home.earthlink.net/~jordanr
>Mark Aldiss <cwm...@bogfoot.com> wrote in message
>news:hYa04.1512$s5.23967@wards...
>> If only you would help me see
>> this mad, intoxic fantasy.
>> This head so full of twists and doubts,
>> this mind that reels beneath the lights.
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> <snip>
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