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Will Dockery

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May 14, 2013, 7:01:01 AM5/14/13
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Hazel's Hex

She holds her hand
against the glass.
Before she gets
too much memory.
This game of numbers
chances so high to lose.

I hesitate
to call her name.
Deep humid night
sick wildflower smell.
Watch her knocking
across the Village Green
I feel a sinking inside.

Looked into her eyes
like a night move to hold her.
But that's not possible.
Frayed pitch
I must have thought I'd tried
but I stopped way short.

Her beauty is eternal
being weary and so wary.
Reconstruct my heart.
Or something like
revisionist memory
since it was nothing
but scrambled dogs and
chitter-chat.

-Will Dockery

Patricia Suddeth

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May 14, 2013, 12:54:26 PM5/14/13
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Will has a way with words...:)
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Will Dockery

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May 14, 2013, 6:18:21 PM5/14/13
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On Tuesday, May 14, 2013 12:54:26 PM UTC-4, Patricia Suddeth wrote:
> On Tuesday, May 14, 2013 7:01:01 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>
> > Hazel's Hex
>
> > She holds her hand
> > against the glass.
> > Before she gets
> > too much memory.
>
> > This game of numbers
> > chances so high to lose.
> > I hesitate
> > to call her name.
>
> > Deep humid night
> > sick wildflower smell.
> > Watch her knocking
> > across the Village Green
> > I feel a sinking inside.
>
> > Looked into her eyes
> > like a night move to hold her.
> > But that's not possible.
>
> > Frayed pitch
> > I must have thought I'd tried
> > but I stopped way short.
>
> > Her beauty is eternal
> > being weary and so wary
> > Reconstruct my heart.
>
> > Or something like
> > revisionist memory
> > since it was nothing
> > but scrambled dogs and
> > chitter-chat.
>
> > -Will Dockery
>
> Will has a way with words...:)

Thanks, Patricia!

Patricia is a good wordsmith herself, lyrics writer for the songs of Wood, Suddeth and Associates and other works:

http://www.reverbnation.com/suddethandassociates

qwerty...@gmail.com

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May 14, 2013, 6:44:56 PM5/14/13
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On Tuesday, May 14, 2013 12:54:26 PM UTC-4, Patricia Suddeth wrote:
Will is the poet laureate of this newsgroup so we expect no less of him.
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Will Dockery

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May 17, 2013, 10:35:36 AM5/17/13
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<qwerty...@gmail.com> wrote in message
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Well Gosh, Horatio, with an endorsement like that, I'm rather at a loss for
words... heh.

Here's the next concert I'm kind of stoked over, though:

The "Minstrels on the Block" concert show at the Harley Davidson pavilion
will be Saturday, June 29th from 11:00 am - 5:00 pm.

http://www.reverbnation.com/show/10562913

All local performers and bands... come out and support the local music
scene!

Brian Mallard & Renegade
Ironclad
Corvus and Canis
Henry Conley Band
Achemy Effect
Diaz and Gevonovich
Mary Jane Band
Andrew Wood
Gary Parmer Trio
Buddy Harden Band
Shannon Jackson-Summers&#65279;
Will Dockery and The Shadowville All-Stars

--
Music & poetry from Will Dockery & The Shadowville All-Stars:
http://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery

Will Dockery

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May 18, 2013, 7:02:00 PM5/18/13
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"Hieronymous House" <hierony...@gmail.com> wrote in message
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> Will can have his way with words,
> but just so you know, if he has his
> way with you, I'm telling Rusty.

"What happens in Shadowville stays in Shadowville."

Will Dockery

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May 18, 2013, 8:16:32 PM5/18/13
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Peter J Ross wrote:
> In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Tue, 14 May 2013 09:54:26 -0700 (PDT),
> ... much as Procrustes had a way with guests.

Son of Neptune... could do worse, thanks.
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Will Dockery

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May 18, 2013, 8:31:23 PM5/18/13
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Peter J Ross wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
>
> > Son of Neptune... could do worse, thanks.
>
> WHOOOOOOOOOOOOO0000OO000OOOOO000OO0O0OSHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!1!!

Made you look.

Heh.

Chuck Lysaght

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May 18, 2013, 9:54:56 PM5/18/13
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Poor Ross. :)

Will Dockery

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May 18, 2013, 11:06:45 PM5/18/13
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On Saturday, May 18, 2013 9:54:56 PM UTC-4, Chuck Lysaght wrote:
> Poor Ross. :)

PJR's jealousy is unbecoming...

Will Dockery

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May 19, 2013, 8:52:11 AM5/19/13
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"Hieronymous House" <hierony...@gmail.com> wrote in message
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> May 14 Peter J Ross wrote:
> In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Tue, 14 May 2013 09:54:26 -0700 (PDT),
> - show quoted text -
> ... much as Procrustes had a way with guests.
>
> If I had a hammer, I'd hammer in the morning.

Nail it in words, our form of Bully Pulpit.

Ny first encounter with Procrustes was back in 1984, delving the meaning of
Harlan Ellison's "Sleepless Nights in the Procrustean Bed":

http://harlanellison.com/review/edge.htm

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Chuck Lysaght

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May 19, 2013, 2:35:27 PM5/19/13
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Don't you just detest smug academics?
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Will Dockery

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May 20, 2013, 4:10:15 PM5/20/13
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On Sunday, May 19, 2013 2:35:27 PM UTC-4, Chuck Lysaght wrote:
> Don't you just detest smug academics?

Depends on the individual personality for me...

Will Dockery

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May 27, 2013, 3:32:31 PM5/27/13
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"Hieronymous House" <hierony...@gmail.com> wrote in message
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>I don't know. I might if I knew any.
> You and I obviously move in very
> different circles.

Wouldn't you agree that a good writer provides enough context in his writing
that a reader would likely be able to understand the meaning of his
statements?

That said... what was the context of this cryptic message of yours, Corey?

If you don't mind me asking.


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Will Dockery

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May 27, 2013, 3:47:27 PM5/27/13
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On Monday, May 27, 2013 3:43:15 PM UTC-4, Hieronymous House wrote:
> Sure. I don't know any smug academics
> so I don't detest smug academics, but I
> might detest smug academics if I knew
> any because I'm not very fond of smug
> people in general. Did I pass detest?

Okay, the "smug academic" thing... as I replied to Chuck, it applies to the individual, as many smug academic types can be great fun to be around, and interestingly, many "academics", smug and otherwise I encounter seem to find a great deal of value in my writinga and drawings.

Go figure, eh?

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Will Dockery

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May 27, 2013, 4:34:58 PM5/27/13
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On Monday, May 27, 2013 4:00:32 PM UTC-4, Hieronymous House wrote:
> You and I move in different
> circles, that's what I figure.

You've seen a few of my circles, and I've heard of a few of yours so your figures may be somewhat accurate.



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George Dance

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May 27, 2013, 8:40:11 PM5/27/13
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I think it was a reply to Chuck Lysaght's post (to you), "Don't you just detest smug academics?" (a reference to ~PJ's~ constant referring to himself as just that).
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Will Dockery

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Jul 21, 2013, 6:09:40 AM7/21/13
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Hard to tell sometimes... around here.

How's it going, George? Have time to run a little critique on me?
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