VSA/HK Urban Legend
Mr. C
Nicole Hon
One day, when it was Moon Night Festival, Jerry celebrated with his family. They were having a good time, except that Jerry’s mother gave a grimace of depress. Therefore, Jerry asked her mother what she wanted. Her mother replied in an angry and contempt voice, saying that no one can help her and she wanted to go to the mountain (Lion Rock).
Afterwards, Jerry leaded his whole family to go up to the mountain. While walking up the mountain, they saw many dark trees. Suddenly, Jerry heard someone is crying. So, he walked to the person and found that the person's face was so pale. The person was crying and so Jerry asked what had happened.
Alex Chan
Kary Lui
He was so afraid. When he went to work the next day, and when the usual people he passed begged him for money, he gave them extra amount of money they needed, gave them Christmas presents, and treated them like he has never did before. The villagers expressions represented that what was happening right in front of them was extremely unbelievable. After a few days, when they started believing that he reflected to change, they gave him gifts and said thank you for borrowing them money. At last the originally negative man lived in heaven, and the villagers all lived peacefully ever after.
Melody So
Urban of Mr.Copus
Ten years ago.... In VSA..... Mr. Copus is an old teacher, he can’t talk very well, Mr. Parker start to think Mr.Copus is not useful, so Mr. Copus got fired.... Mr. Copus commit suicide after he heard the bad news, inside his classroom no.1112, he burn down his classroom and dead.
After Mr. Copus died, he was replace by Mr. Supoc. Mr. Copus was so angry because he love his classroom and he doesn’t want anyone to have it. Mr. Copus tried to speak but he just saying some language he doesn’t understand - Chinese....
From the day Mr. Copus found himself speaking Chinese, every Thursday 10:20am, when Mr. Supoc is teaching English, there’s someone saying chinese even all the students aren’t talking.
On Tuesday, 30 October 2012 15:00:37 UTC+8, Mr. C wrote:
Nicole Hon
One day, when it was Moon Night Festival, Jerry celebrated with his family.They ate a lot of yummy moon cakes from Maxim. They were having a good time, except that Jerry’s mother gave a grimace of depress. Therefore, Jerry asked her mother what she wanted. Her mother replied in an angry and contempt voice, saying that no one can help her and she wanted to go to the mountain (Lion Rock).
Afterwards, Jerry leaded his whole family to go up to the mountain by 1. While walking up the mountain, they saw many dark trees. Suddenly, Jerry heard someone is crying. So, he walked to the person and found that the person's face was so pale. The person was crying and so Jerry asked what had happened.
On Tuesday, 30 October 2012 15:00:37 UTC+8, Mr. C wrote:
Milton Wai Chung Suen
Last Sunday night, I was taking a bath after my whole entire day. But I forgot to take my cloths, so I ran straightly to my room so that no one can see my naked body. When I was ready to change my cloths, I saw a boy is wearing my cloths and smile to me. The when I want to check if my cloths were still there, the cloths were gone same as the boy. So I wore another set of cloths for Sunday night. I was worrying that if the boy will steal any valuable things in my house. The boy was wearing one set of my cloths, a cap, a pair of socks and a pair of shoes. He is a tiny little cute boy but don’t let his cute look fools you, or else you will regret for not valuing the opportunity to kill this monster.
When I was sleeping and having a nice dream but the boy was standing in front of my room, open the door and woke me up at 1am, and he was trying to kill me with his sharp knife. So I face react against the boy and try to take his knife to kill him. The killer is extremely strong and undefeatable but I use a hidden blade to kill him. I was very intensive after I killed him because I don't know where can I hide his body without being detected by my neighbor and the police. I choose to hide his body inside the foundation of a building so that no one will know it if I wont spread it out to anyone. This is the best way to handle his body.
The next day, my dad is driving his car with me to school. But in the highway, he is right in front of the middle of the highway to block my car. My dad doesn’t know that he is an evil, so my dad stops and tells him to move away. Suddenly, the sky turns dark as the night with a blue moon. We didn't notice that the evil kid is besides us staring at us terribly and it makes me nervous because I don't know when will he attack me. The atmosphere is full of mist and I can’t see any thing. We close all the windows and panic. This is a quite atmosphere, so if we are making a single noise, he can find us immediately. This atmosphere is good for reading but it’s bad for fighting against the devil. My dad decided to move the car to see if we can crush on his body by finding his location. Finally we killed him, but this time we throw his body right inside the ocean and ran away immediately.
A t h e n a
Once upon a time, there was a man called Mr. Copus. He worked as a teacher at a school called Victoria Shanghai Academy.
One day, he wanted to pee, so he went to the toilet. After he finished his business, he went to wash his hands, suddenly he saw a shadow in the mirror. But he was sure that he was the only one that was in the toilet, he checked all the stalls and there was no one there. He was so scared that he ran screaming like a little girl.
It turns out that there were a few someones hiding in the boys bathroom, since it was Halloween, they wanted to play a prank on him. But what happened to Mr. Copus remains a mystery. Everything is unknown. OOOOOOOO XD
Ian Lee
A BETTER STORY
A long time ago, there was a small wooden cottage on a hill by the port of Shum Wan Road, Aberdeen. The cottage was small and old, but it was sturdy and dependable. There lived a small group of fishermen, their names were John, Bob and Henry. Every morning they would go to the portside where they would fish for sardines and chat together. One fateful night, they returned to their cottage to feast and dine. A nasty storm swept over the portside, and the strong rain and wind were crashing against the window. The fishermen were eating sausage bread and sardines when they heard a loud knock at the door, Bob went to open the door, as the door slid open a young man entered the cottage. The young man's simple, tattered clothes were dripping wet, so the fishermen offered him shelter.
The young man never spoke, his eyes cold and his face expressionless. The fishermen decided to offer the young man food and shelter. The young man ate a lot of food and exhausted all of the fishermen's supplies, but he was still hungry and longing. The fishermen were tired and wary so they decided to rest for the night.
Under the cover of the stormy night, the young man went to the kitchen and took the butchering knife, he went to the fishermen’s bedroom and raised his sharp, metallic and bloodthirsty blade.
First he killed John by slicing his throat, then he killed Bob and slicing off his head, he approached the sleeping body of Henry but he accidentally woke him up. Henry jumped, his face full of fear and surprise, he ran out of the room, screaming; The young man looked at him with his eyes like a vulture, he went after him. Henry ran out of the cabin but the young man kept chasing him, the bloodthirsty maniac sunk his blade deep into Henry’s back, and his blood spilled all over the side of the hill.
The young man ate the flesh of all of the fishermen, as he walked away from the cabin, satisfied and full.
Many years later, a school was built on what used to be the old cottage. The school’s name was Victoria Shanghai Academy, and it is said that the ghostly fishermen still haunt the grounds of the school to this very day.
Nicholas/Larry
Urban legends all have a feature that is common in everyday life and manipulated to sound realistic even if it is highly unbelievable. These become popular as the stories spread from people to others, who then continue to spread the story. It often starts as when people have nothing to do, they start making up stories, and when it gets interesting, they tell it to others even if its lame and boring for the fun of it. People believe in them because they don’t normally check to see if it is true, don’t take notice, or that the event in the urban legend occurs too rarely. Urban legends are always passed around, otherwise one might not have heard of it today. Some common features and true facts is mixed into the story to make it seem more realistic. Fear and mystery is shrouded in these stories making it popular to tell at times. They are normally never proven as people don’t have the time and should they insist that the tale does not exist and check it out, not a lot of attention would be paid to them, as although it is obvious the story is fake, there is the tiny chance it may be true and has actually happened before.
As somebody who frequently travels around VSA, I, and many others know that it is built on a slope, and while walking down the dark staircase between the fourth and fifth floor outside the washroom beside the hall, a steep long slope is visible leading into the unknown darkness. One day, a group of year-eights were walking down the stairs when they heard a cry for help. Thinking that it was a Primary One student being annoying, they continued down. As they were about to open the door to the fourth floor corridor, they heard crying, as if next to them. They looked around, but saw nobody. The group alerted school faculty and later the fire department, who conducted a search on the premises, finding no one. Feeling that it was really peculiar, the group of Year-8s searched the Internet for any news in the area surrounding VSA. They found many news articles about a little child playing beside the road above the slope, killed by a flash flood drowning and depositing him in the abyss at the bottom of the slope. Should one travel at a quiet time by him or herself or a small group, they may hear a child crying and screaming for help and maybe a few toys that belonged to the little kid.
With the future Wong Chuk Hang station being built a 12-minute walk away from VSA, it may serve our students. The land for the station came from the demolished Wong Chuk Hang Estate, and one unexplainable mystery occurred there. One night, a security guard working there noticed some one with long hair sitting on the floor of an elevator with their face covered via a CCTV screen. The elevator was stuck, so he called emergency services. The rescuers looked at the CCTV screen and saw a mysterious person sitting in one corner of the elevator with their head down, so the rescuers could not see his or her face. After hard, grueling work, the workers managed to open the elevator doors, to find nobody inside! The rescuers searched the premises and checked the CCTV cameras, but the missing one was nowhere to be found. The rescue workers left and checked records of the elevator. They realized that the elevator shaft with the mysterious person in it had a history of faulty elevators and that there was once the elevator wires snapped with a person inside plummeting to their death. There was no photo record of that person and forensic scientists at the time were unable to identify the identity of the dead person. All that is known is that the person who died had long hair.
Natalie Chan
Have you been on a Hong Kong bus before? You might know some famous ones, like 75, 72A, 82D and 2A. But have you ever heard of 35? NO! But there’s a story why it doesn’t exist…
One midnight, long ago, when the bus company of Hong Kong just opened, the bus #35 went driving down the road. The bus driver, Adam Copus, almost have to finish his job for the day. He was driving to the terminal. He looked at the rear mirror – there was only one passenger left. It was a girl at the most rear part of the bus.
Mr. Copus kept driving. But when he glanced at the mirror again, the girl was gone! He was so shocked he skidded to a sudden stop. When he looked again, the girl was back, but with a weird looking on her face that Mr. Copus couldn’t quite make out since she was so far away. Mr. Copus started the bus again. He needed to get his job done. When he glanced at the mirror again, she was yet gone again! And again, Mr. Copus skidded to a stop, looking back - the girl was back, but with blood on her face.
That phrase repeated for a couple of times, each time the girl appeared to have more blood than before. Until one time, Mr. Copus stopped looking at the rear mirror, and he heard footsteps, coming closer and closer.
From that day on, Mr. Copus mysteriously went missing, and the number 35 on the turning thing that controls which number of the bus shown at the front of every bus went missing as well.
To be honest, I got that story from a joke, where the girl comes out and tapes on the driver’s shoulder and say “What do you think you’re doing? I hid behind the chair in front of me and tried to tie my shoelaces when you suddenly stopped the bus! See what you did to me?” So… that was really a joke.
On Tuesday, 30 October 2012 15:00:37 UTC+8, Mr. C wrote:
Hoi Man Yau
While they were eating, the youngest child, Ian, suddenly had nosebleed, his parents said,"Don't worry, he will be fine." Ian continued to hold a piece of tissue over his nose when suddenly he screamed in agony and dropped the tissue.
Ian's parents looked at him, in awe, suddenly, a pair of claws emerged from Ian's head and teared him in half! The claws came from a terrifying being that is black and red and looks like an twisted tiger-monkey hybrid. Ian's family screamed and ran for the door. Suddenly, something on the ceiling pounced on them, it was another one of those! Ian's parents were killed immediately, dying to the deadly claws. And the beings suddenly melted into a puddle of black slime.
To this day, on the Jumbo floating restaurant, a black stain can still be found on the carpet.
Anson Fong
Urban legend
This urban legend happens in the school VSA. It is about the cafeteria’s food and what is inside the cafeteria.
One day James went to the cafeteria and he is alone and suddenly there is a guy holding a long a tower and cover James mouth and bring him into the cafeteria, and inside had a mystery place that is very cold and James felt so scared and he finding some door to get away and run away, but the door is locked. That place is very cold and he changes to an ice and that guy came in and breaks all James fingers and eats it. Then he breaks James to pieces and put James into the microwave and start it in 100 degree and James just melt and burn to black and gone.
So don’t stay in school in the cafeteria alone when it is dark.
Anson lee:)(8-6)
The high way ghost story
Anson lee
Once upon a night, Mr. Bhatia drive a car pass the high way.
Can you drive me home? ,the little girl said. Then Mr. Bhatia ask her where do you live? I don’t know because I have a long time didn’t back home, he little girl said, from that time Mr. Bhatia feel nervous and scared because when she is on the way back to the house, suddenly she has gone, as you see that Mr. Bhatia is a good person because she left the t shirt in the car. So Mr. Bhatia knock the door, a man open door for him, what can I help you sir, he said, then he tell the man your daughter left the t shirt in my car, the man’s wife hear that then immediately cry, he ask did she alright? The man tell him my daughter was already died over 5 years, then the man give the photo of his daughter to him.
Then he feel horrible, after that the little girl always keep annoying him, after 2 years he invite catching ghost master then the master fight 30 round of the little girl in the high way, finally master have collected the ghost, from now on Mr. Bhatia have a good life to enjoy.
The End
On Tuesday, 30 October 2012 15:00:37 UTC+8, Mr. C wrote:
Sylvester Chan
The Toilet Ghost
At the toilet, no one ever gone to there yet.
In that toilet, there is a legend that there is a people going to the toilet, he saw a man watching him, but his leg is still on the flour, he thought that the man is so tall. But when he comes out and trying to catch him, the man ran so fast that he can’t catch him.
He saw a stranger, then he ask the stranger did he saw a tall man that running, but he said he didn’t saw a man that is very tall and running instead he saw a man that walking by, and his describe the face same as the face he saw.
How did the man watch him going to toilet? It because he took his head off and hold up and watch!!
the end
Bernard Liu (8-6)
The Forbidden Curse
Have you heard of the school “terror-secondary school”? maybe you haven’t but after you read this myths, you won’t want to be a student in that school. There is a terrible story happening in "terror-secondary school", it was normally a secondary school, but because everyone is scared of the curse of that school, everyday between 6 to 7 something scary happened.
The fangs and long teethes appear in the teacher's mouth and hand and they start to transform in to a monster and they can't see , but they can hear , so everyday between 6 to 7 there will be some strange sounds and that's the sound when the teacher bumps around, when they can't see.
When they fully transform to a monster, they will mess up the school and they will run to the cafeteria and steal all the foods and Mess around, that's why the food stores around that school is empty everyday and there is blood around and broken scarfs , after that no one wants go in to that food store again and the host of the store has suicide, because he is scared of the curse all around him.
At last the monsters transformed back to a normal human with hard naked and they lefted their broken piece of clothes behind around tai po, after that curse appear, no one access that school and tai po area again, the monks believe that the entrance of that school have a curse that would ruined your entire life.
Edwin Cheng (8-6)
Marion Chu (8-3)
I was in VSA since primary. I always heard rumours of places in the school being haunted, blood handprints printed on the walls of the back staircase. The most common rumour that I have heard was that the girl’s bathroom near the music room on the 4/F is haunted, and i bet that some other students would have really heard of it before.
Rumour has it that when the people were building the school, there was a little girl that lived in Aberdeen nearby the school. One day, the little girl was in the Park n’ shop near the school with her grandmother one afternoon. She thought that it would be funny to run away then having her grandmother to notice that she’s gone. So she ran out of the supermarket, slipping through the crowd without her grandma noticing. She ran down the street, passing the police station and down to the construction area. She slipped through the fences into the construction area. She ran across the dirt, she was so little and wearing dark colour clothes that the construction workers couldn’t see her from the big and tall machines they are driving. Suddenly, a men driving a dragline excavator was pulling huge and heavy metals, the excavator turned, the metal swung right to the little girl and knocked her in to the ground a few metres away, dead. She lied down near a pile of dirt, not moving a muscle, as the other construction workers pour more dirt on to the pile, burying the little girl without noticing.
There the little girl laid dead, without a single person knowing, rumour says that the 4/F Girl’s bathroom was build right next to the hill she was buried in. You could sometimes hear her wailing for her grandmother, crying and screeching at night.
On Tuesday, October 30, 2012 3:00:37 PM UTC+8, Mr. C wrote:
Jason Ma (8-6)
Mr. C於 2012年10月30日星期二UTC+8下午3時00分37秒寫道：
Post your 3-4 paragraph VSA/HK "Urban Legend" here.
Urban Myths
Scary High-street
In the Hong Kong island there is one of the most scary ghost house in Kong Kong. In the history the house is build of the UK for the viral people, because there is any medicine for that viral so that the people got that viral they have to stay at that house until they are dead. During the war, the japanese us that house for a Execution ground, chinese people are executed in there. After the war, strange things Happen. The house have become a hospital of Mental illness. Some doctor some time hear there is some crying or screaming sound. And the there is marching sound of solider in the night. Marching sound of solider always happen, it happen in po hen street.
Ian Chiang 8-3
Cry of the Ghost and the Headless Man
Long time ago, Legend of Hong Kong has been spreading about this house that was once a house that was really expensive. There was an Indian couple called Luatzi and Jigara. They were planning to stay in Hong Kong and rent a really big house. They lived really happy, found splendid jobs, bought a Ferrari and they soon bought the apartment. Years past, they lived really happy in a this big house, they soon got really rich and famous through out Hong Kong. (famous long time ago)
One day on a rainy day, Luatzi was driving home on his Ferrari when she saw a Hong Kong lady crying beside the road, standing there and wearing Chinese costume. (Hong Kong people wear these really common) Luatzi was attracted by his beautiful appearance and falls in love with the lady. She asked if she would want a drive or not and the lady cried and said, “yes, thank you”. Luatzi asked about her name and her personal background and the lady said “ my name is Chuan-Hua and I was born in a rich family. My family died from a car accident 3 years ago. The family business was closed and I am just working in a bar.” Luatzi decided to let her stay in their house. When Jigara heard about her background she let her stay in the house also. After a while, Luatzi found a job for Chuan-Hua and she fell in love with Luatzi. They always had secret meeting and ate together, Jigara found out and always had dispute with Luatzi. 2 years later, Chuan-Hua was pregnant, Luatzi decided to kill the baby. Chuan-Hua rejected and said that the baby must be born. Few moths later, the baby was born. The husband decided to run away with Chuan-Hua to somewhere else. They were about to pack when the wife came back seeing his Luatzi and Chuan-Hua kissing, holding luggage and money with the baby beside. Jigara was so frustrated that she took a knife and stab the Chuan-Hua when Luatzi took a gun and shoot her. Jigara was shot in the head and Chuan-Hua was stab in the heart. Luatzi was so sad that he hanged himself in the very end of the hallway. The baby cried and cried and never stopped, even when there was no food and water. The police could only find the body of the Indian couple’s head. Where did the baby and Chuan-Hua go?
This story has past for 200 years and people says that if you open the door, you’ll see outdated money at the very end of the corridor and you can hear baby crying, but you cannot see where the baby is, later you will hear the Indian couple arguing and throwing things to each other without seeing the body. People has found out that Chuan-Hua actually died in the car crash with his family. The baby is a half man half ghost. Then there was a man who didn’t believe in the legend bought the area and made a plastic surgery company, but they have not successfully did it one time, because they can always hear, a voice of a lady saying I hat Hong Kong woman. The company could not gain any money so they had to sell it away. Workers there said that they could always hear the sound of 2 couple arguing and a baby crying. A lot of people went into the house, because there is money in it, but no one has ever successfully came out. People wonder.
Scientists tried to throw in white powder and they discover foot print in the floor, they have gain physical evidence and scientist try went in to see why people cant come out, but they could see people that tried to get the money only have their head. The scientist was so scared that they ran away and never came back to investigate.
Ryan Kwong (8-3)
Urban Myth
A scary rollercoaster
One day, there have a festival in Ocean Park. In that day, it has a lot of people go to there. A girl gets on the rollercoaster, she see something that the another people cannot see, she see when the rollercoaster move, there have one piece has gone and it makes all people die in this accident, so the girl want to get off the rollercoaster, but the controller don’t let her to come out, at last, all passages die……
Sam(8-3)
So is Friday the thirteenth, July. Few guys was stuffing around, they were really really wasted. One of them come up with going to the cemertery, so they did.
They went have a walk and think it wasn't even creepy so they decide to do a backflip off the graves. One of them came up with recording it, and they do that too. They all did one until the last one did one and land on a glass/can/jar whatever it's called of bone ash. Everyone was like crap let's get the hell out of here.
They all started to run off. They were so drunk that they forgot how they got in, it comes to a fence with a road and a bridge next to it. A gate was open and they rush out. The street is so quiet cause it was around 2:30 at the morning and they decide to go home, but they were so drunk they forgot how to go home. they saw a stadium for horse racing and they climb went in. They decide to sleep on a bench and never woke up.
Their body was found their bone was smash to ashes, their ashes was everywhere, all the way to the cemetery. Now remember they recorded the whole thing, and they never turned it off. The video was not pretty.
Ian Lau (8-3)
Mr. Copus is back
It was 5:30 in the afternoon; Sam was walking down the hallway of 11/F, He was alone and the hallway was dark… he hoped that he would leave earlier so that this won’t happen…
Sam saw Mr. Copus at the end of the hallway, they don’t know each other since Mr. Copus is not Sam’s teacher and Sam is not his student. Mr. Copus said to Sam “Can you help me to take this to the office? These are the hockey stuff for the school team,” Sam said “sure!” and he took it from Mr. Copus. He got down the office and told the reception that Mr. Copus told him to take this down from the 11/F. The lady was shocked and tears started to come out. Sam asked what happened and that’s what the lady said, “Mr. Copus was the best teacher in VSA, but Mr. Parker doesn’t like him because he stole his girlfriend, so Mr. Parker decided to fire him. Mr. Copus was so sad that he killed himself in the kitchen…” Sam was so shocked that he threw away the hockey stuff he’s holding and he ran away. He ran back to the 11/F and he saw Mr. Copus at the down of the hallway saying hi to him. He was so scared that he peed on his pants. Sam blinks his eye and Mr. Copus was gone…
Sam told his story to the others but no one else sees Mr. Copus. After this incident, the 11/F was haunted, horror stuff always happens, such as leaking water and found of skulls. No one would ever stay after school and stay at the 11/F…
Eva Yeung (8-3)
Haunted Dancing Room
A few years ago when I was still in Primary school, my Principal told us about a girl named Elena in the Secondary section being killed by a traffic accident.
Elena had been dancing ballet since she was very young. Her best friend Gianna had a really great passion on dancing too. They both used to dance in the dancing room on the ninth floor in the Secondary section. Elena went there nearly every day after school. She even did her homework there because she really loved the whole atmosphere of the dancing room. She had won lots of gold medals for every year's dancing competition. Some of her medals and photos were kept in the dancing room for display purposes so that everyone could have a look on them.
Having heard of the sad news about Elena’s accident, Gianna felt so upset and went to the dancing room every day to recall her memories with her best friend. One day, she went into the dancing room as usual and practiced dancing. She looked at all the medals and awards won by her friend on the display window. They had become very dusty now, so she decided to take a towel and wipe them nicely. While she was wiping them, she heard a sudden knock on the door. She opened the door swiftly but no one was there. She closed the door thinking that she had misheard something. However, after some while the knocking sound was heard again, and repeated everytime Gianna was there. And every time when Gianna tried to open the door, no one was there. She then realized that it might be her best friend Elena, who had passed by and revisited her all-time favourite place, the dancing room. She therefore stayed there every day and waited for Elena’s return.
This weird myth has been mentioned a few years ago but it is still discussed sometimes nowadays. No one would dare to stay in that dancing room alone. People in my school even said that wiping the golden medals will clear the dust and reflect the image of Elena.
Aaron Wang (8-3)
On a gloomy Friday
afternoon, five years ago, around 6 o’clock, Zachery Bulnuf was controlling one
of the hundreds of MTR trains in Hong Kong. The train was crossing the Victoria
Harbour when the MTR ahead of him mysteriously stopped 500 metres ahead of him.
By the time he was notified, it was too late. The train crashed in to the other
train with such force that blew a hole through the earth above it allowing the
waters of Victoria Harbour to immerse the underground subways systems. The shock wave vaporized Zachery’s body instantaneously and was never recovered, but his spirits still linger in our world.
During his trial, the
jury and the judge found Zachery guilty of this terrible incident and his family members were
forced to pay for the damage that he caused. Zachery’s spirit was furious and enraged.
He vowed to take his revenge on the people of Hong Kong, the people who betrayed
him, and the people who put his loved ones in debt.
Legend says that Zachery
will take his revenge on people of Hong Kong in the same way that got him killed and put his family in debt 5 years ago, in a train
accident. Zachery
Bulnuf's ghost can still be heard in the MTR as a loud, metallic, high-pitched screech. His ghosts are scattered in each and every one of the MTR trains, following and tracking their every movement, waiting for the perfect moment to take his revenge....
HelenXD hui
There’s a rumour in the new school of Trina. A girl was murdered at school, in front of her best friend’s locker. People said that the dead girl’s soul is living in there, every student assigned to that locker ends up to get killed for some weird reason. Trina was very unlucky to be assigned to that locker; she started to get discriminated around the school. People started to avoid her because of that locker she is using and the rumour. Since people start to avoid her, she doesn’t have any friends, so she didn’t know why she gets to be avoided. When she starts to use the locker she found out that there’s always a slip saying “Help, Emma!” and suddenly it vanished in the thin air and started to hear voices that other people don’t, like “Keep away from Ben…”
In science class, Trina was assigned to do a project with Ben, what a coincidence. They became very good friends and Ben told her about that rumour. The locker belongs to a girl name Emma, she transfer schools after her best friend got murdered at school, her best friend was killed at school while getting help but was killed by then. Her best friend helped Emma to cover her embarrassing secret with her boyfriend and got killed because of it. After knowing the truth, Trina started to wonder why do Ben know so much, cause she started to ask people about the voice she always hear, something like “ keep away from Ben!” People think she’s insane. Ben seems like a very good guy why do I have to keep away from him, she wondered.
On the same day, she went back home, she went into the bathroom, on the mirror the red lipstick was writing on its own, “It done. Don’t worry.” Suddenly there’s a knock on the door, police are here. And there found Ben dead, lying on the ground. The policeman said that someone reported to the police station and said that Ben have bought a big excessive amount of drugs and buried at you house backyard. We want to search you backyard and investigate on it. We need you to come and give us some more information so we can continue to do our investigate of this wanted crime.
Kevin Kung (8-3)
A long time ago there was a small local school at the port of Shum wan road, Aberdeen. It was an old school that had been there of decades, and only the smartest of kids went to that school. But one day due to an accident in the science lab, a fire started right in the middle of the room. The fire grew bigger and bigger until it spread around the whole room. The fire alarm wasn’t working at that time and the sprinklers were broken. The fire quickly spread around the whole floor, then the whole school. Some of the students and staff managed to escape but most was stuck in the fire and then died. The fire department came quickly but it was too late the school was already burning. When the fire finally died out, there were a lot of burned bodies and a lot of people were missing. They decided to shut down the school and demolished that place, due to the amount of reports from the students about strange noise, and ghost that still haunts the school.
Years later there was a new school that was build there it was named VSA. The students there always get good grades. The teachers were very proud of their students, but they were also very confused to why the students always gets good grades but they never pay attention in class at all. The student has a secret about why they always get good grades in assessments, all the students knew about this and none of them told the students told the teachers about it. The secret is every time when there’s a assessments in class the ghost of the smart students will appear and tell the students the answer. The ghost are very friendly and only shows themselves to the students, so the teacher can’t hear or see them at all.
Audrey Ching (8-3)
One day, a little boy and her mother went to the toy store. The little boy asked if theres any dolls, but the man said no. When they’re about to leave, the little boy saw a doll with huge eyes and big mouth standing infront of the door. He was so happy and told her mother to buy it, his mother asks how much is the doll but the man said he have never ever seen the doll in his shop so he just gave it to the little for free. The doll wears a pink dress, with huge eyes and huge mouth.
When the litte boy got home, he played with the doll day and night. But one day, when he’s asleep, he heard a noise coming out from his closet. He was so scared but trying to stay calm, finally he turned on the lights and saw the doll was walking. He thought he was just his imagination so he turned off the lights and slept. In morning, he told his mom what happened but his mom thought he was just joking and told him if he’s scared, just give away the doll to someone else. But the little liked the doll a lot, so he just kept it in his closet.
On the other night, when he’s asleep, he heard the noise from the closet again. He opened the closet and realized the doll was gone. And then he found the doll on the floor, the little boy thought it was suspicious, he putted the doll back into the closet and slept. This happened again and again, the little boy was so scared so he locked his doll in his closet and put his keys beside his bed. At midnight, there were noises in his closet again. He opened it and the doll was gone. In the morning, he saw the doll back up in the closet again. He quickly threw away his doll into the garbage can, and slept at night. At midnight, there were a noise coming out from his door, when the little boy woke up, he saw the doll standing right beside his pillow……..
I got this idea from the story chucky, I am very scared of ghost stories so I just made one up very quickly in day time.
On Tuesday, October 30, 2012 3:00:37 PM UTC+8, Mr. C wrote:
Katrina Hung(8-3)
VSA URBAN MYTH
----dancing with the devil---
There was always a tradition at VSA, to celebrate chrsitmas, they hold a Christmas ball every year in school, where everyone can attend, even people from other schools..
This year, there was this girl in the ball with black long hair and wore a red dress, she were together with her other friends. She was the center attention, everyone wanted to meet her, but no one ever caught her attention.
Until…
A guy showed up, wearing a black linon suit with a golden mask. He walked over, and bowed to the girl. “may you dance with me, beautiful?”. She stared at him for a moment and nodded.
They started dancing in the center of the hall, everyone was looking at them, slowly, he started to spin her around
And around..
And around..
Until her legs felt burning hot and painful..
She wanted to stop. But he continued spinning her around, faster, and faster until she looses her mind. Later on, after the party ended, the girl was no were to be found.. no one remembered her..
She was sent to hell, the guy was a devil.
Mr. C於 2012年10月30日星期二UTC+8下午3時00分37秒寫道：
Thomas Ng
In Hong Kong, everyone lived happily. They are satisfied with their life with sufficient materials. One day, a student call Thom got mad because he was being bullied by the other students in his grade. He cursed himself into a headless horseman, sucking a person’s soul to maintain his life. He turned those students who bullied him into scary creatures. He turned them into grim reaper, ghost rider, slender man, zombie, werewolf, and vampire. Every night, they helped Thom to rule Hong Kong, by killing people, taking their soul and feed on it. They are never die, so people call them the horror 7. During night time, citizens would hide in the underground to keep safe, no one will leave the underground for the night. No one knows the real identity of the horror 7. No one dare to tell about it. Everyone that escapes into underground feed on food that they find on land. However, they do not have enough food. So some of them died because of starvation and diseases. The way they escape is every afternoon they pack all the food they can find, and go underground before nightfall. How the horror 7 feed on soul is by killing the human, and pull the soul out from the chest of the victim. They keep the soul in a soul bag and use them in the future to make them more powerful.
They rule more place one day by one day. Finally in the future , they completely rule the earth. all people have to live on the moon just for safety.
Ingrid:3 (8-3)
The Curse of the Shade of the Moon
Every 17 years, the Sun will be covered exactly at the middle by the moon. And it happened this year. At the dark shade of the moon, theres a review of what happened several thousands year ago, but theres is no proof that it’s real. Even so, the witnesses should have passed away years ago. It shows that long ago, a person that was missing was found dead with the head in the fountain. People believed she committed suicide, and some believed she was murdered. People around her all have a perfect alibi. Time passes and this mystery wasn’t solved. People than forget this incident. But by that day, her friends and family was missing one by one. Time flows. Later, her boyfriend’s sister went to his house. She couldn’t find her and she was about to leave. By then, she heard a phone ringing in the toilet. So that girl went inn and have a look, and she found her brother, laying in the bath tube with eyes and mouth opened as wide as possible. She was so scared and she ran out of the house immediately. Unfortunately, to her fear, she didn’t realiz that she went out the house by the window. She was so scared and she jumped out of the window, down the hill and died immediately.
17 years passed and a boy went to the girl’s house. that boy was the girl’s classmate before. Since no one lived and went to there, that house was abandoned. The boy went to he girl’s room and she saw her hung herself facing the window. He was so scared and he ran out immediately, but this time he ran out by the door, since he remembered the case of the girl hop out the window. He didn’t die, but everynight that boy had nightmares about the girl finding him.
To curiosity, people, again, started to make myths and sayings about if someone dies every 17 years, it takes another soul. And also, people wouldn’t wonder around themselves anymore when the Moon is in the middle of the Sun.
Edric Lee XXD
‘Once a pond a time, there is three little pigs ,one day , their mom told them “Three little pigs , three little pigs . You guys has grow up and you should be living on your own right now. Than the three little pigs said together ” But why mum, why?” After that mum said “Just do what i told you to and i am going to tell you guys the reason later. After a month later , their mom has been found dead beside the river and no body saw this happen and nobody know when or why. But inside her pocket , there was a letter for the three little pigs
which says :
Dear three little pigs,
Hi my three baby how are you? If you see this letter , that means l am dead. There is one thing that I want to tell you guy for a long time . The reason that I tell you guys lo leave a month ago is because there is a ghost inside our house and trying to kill me , and now it didi it, and i am dead. hope you guys will have a nice life .
your mum
Mrs Pig
That is all of the letter and after that they have a nice life and thats the end , thank you ~
END
Nicole Hon (8-6)
Jerry Wong (8-6)
Second Draft-(
THE PHANTOM OF THE AUDITORIUM )
The land of VSA was originally a part of a theatre called "The Theatre of the Goddess". The theatre had it’s last show 10 years ago when the famous singer CY sang her last song before she was assassinated by a spy from Russia who is disguised as an audience. On that night, she wore the famous medieval red dress with the high tip shoes. CY wanted to seek revenge on the spy, and from that point forward, the grounds near the theatre are said to be haunted by her ghost. The grounds continue to be haunted, even after multiple changes in terrain.
Many years later, a girl named Nicole works in a school called VSA, which was built on top of the land that used to be the "The Theatre of the Goddess". One night, while she was going to make a movie about VSA during nighttime, she heard a ghostly voice coming from the auditorium. Her blood froze for a moment. She thought it was just an illusion. She walked towards the auditorium as the voice grew louder and louder. She opened the door of the pitch black auditorium as the entire theatre lit up magically. On the center stage, she saw a woman singing in English. The women was wearing the same dress as CY does. Nicole walked towards to the woman and tried to touch her, but she disappeared and reappeared on the other side of the auditorium. Nicole was astonished at that. At the same time, one of the stage lights fell on her, killing her instantly.
Many years later, Nicole’s dried blood is still present in the floor of the auditorium, the school tried to clean it away once, but the blood stayed, and the school eventually had to board it up to prevent any suspicion of paranormal activities.Still, CY’s dress miraculously appeared again in the house
From that point forward, the legend of the ghost of CY continued to haunt the auditorium. Until CY gets her revenge, nobody can ever live in the night of VSA.
Bernard Liu (8-6)
2nd Draft:
The Curses
Have you heard of the school “terror-land”? Maybe you haven’t but after you read this myth, you would not want to know about it. There is a horrible curse in "terror-land", it was a school originally, but because everyone is scared of the curse in that school, so the school is empty now.
At night, there will be some strangers walking around in “ terror-land” and when they turn around the fangs and long teethes starts to appear and they slowly transform in to a monster, they couldn’t hear, but they can hear, so everyday during night time, there will be some strange sounds from the school and the neighbors there had already report to the manager council, but it doesn’t seem to work.
When they fully transform to a monster, they will mess up the school and they will sneak in to the food stores and mess around, that's why the food stores in Tai Po was always running out of food and there is blood around and broken pieces of cloth left around, the host of the store has report to the police and the police try to invest the reason and they sent out 2 police to stay there and look for hints, but the next day the 2 police died beside the food store and they decided to close file without an acceptable reason, after the news was out, no one has been to that food store again and the host of the store has suicide, because he is afraid of the curse and he can’t resist anymore.
To avoid tragedies, the government has decided to remove “terror-land” and after the government has remove it the curse seems to disappeared, no monsters anymore but people in Tai Po was affected by Psychological impact and they decided to move to another country.
Ian Lee (8-6)
AN EVEN BETTER STORY
A long time ago, there was a small wooden cottage on a hill by the port of Shum Wan Road, Aberdeen. The cottage was small and old, but it was sturdy and dependable. There lived a small group of fishermen, their names were John, Bob and Henry. Every morning they would go to the portside where they would fish for sardines and chat together. One fateful night, they returned to their cottage to feast and dine. A nasty storm swept over the portside, and the strong rain and wind were crashing against the window. The fishermen were eating sausage bread and sardines when they heard a loud knock at the door, Bob went to open the door, as the door slid open a young man entered the cottage. The young man's simple, tattered clothes were dripping wet, so the fishermen offered him shelter.
The young man never spoke, his eyes cold and his face expressionless. The fishermen decided to offer the young man food and shelter. The young man ate a lot of food and exhausted all of the fishermen's supplies, but he was still hungry and longing. The fishermen were tired and wary so they decided to rest for the night.
Under the cover of the stormy night, the young man went to the kitchen and took the butchering knife, he went to the fishermen’s bedroom and raised his sharp, metallic and bloodthirsty blade.
First he killed John by slicing his throat, then he killed Bob and slicing off his head, he approached the sleeping body of Henry but he accidentally woke him up. Henry jumped, his face full of fear and surprise, he ran out of the room, screaming; The young man looked at him with his eyes like a vulture, he went after him. Henry ran out of the cabin but the young man kept chasing him, the bloodthirsty maniac sunk his blade deep into Henry’s back, and his blood spilled all over the side of the hill.
The young man ate the flesh of all of the fishermen, as he walked away from the cabin, satisfied and full.
Many years later, a school was built on what used to be the old cottage. The school’s name was Victoria Shanghai Academy, and it is said that the blood of the fishermen still lay on the hillside, visible and reeking of death.
Mira Chow(8-3)
As a new student at VSA, there are lots of things about this school that I haven’t heard of but I am sure that it is certainly haunted. About 2 weeks ago, my friends and I were at the 11th floor waiting for Mr. Copus. We waited and waited, until the 3:45 bell rang and at that time we were the only group of people in the hallway. No one was in the hallway and Sam needed to go home so we decided to leave.
Nothing happened until we reached the 9th floor. We heard a girl’s voice screaming for us and at first we ignored it, but the voice got louder and louder that we couldn’t ignore anymore. We went into the hallways of the 9th floor and saw a pity girl standing there. The girl was pale, a little shorter than me and not wearing school uniforms. We went ahead and asked her what happened, she told us that she needed to go find Mr. Copus but she got lost in the school and cannot find him. My friends and I asked her who she was and she told me that she is his little sister. We thought about it and decided to take her to the 7th floor staffroom. Mr. Copus was not there so we decided to leave. The pity girl gave us some homemade cookies as a present and we said goodbye to one another. After that, Sam and I were walking down the stairs and we saw Mr. Copus. I told him about the girl that was searching for him. He looked at us in shock and fear and a second after, he sobbed and told us that his sister died 20 years ago. We all stared at one another and I almost fainted. He asked where did we got the cookies and we told him that the girl gave it to us. He stared at the cookies for a long time and told us that when his sister died, she was eating and giving out cookies. Sam and I were shocked knowing that the cookies we were eating may be made by a ghost and we might have just seen a ghost. He showed us a photo of his sister and it looked exactly the same as the pity girl.
He asked us to give him a little bit of the cookie, he tasted it and told us that it is the same exact taste as the ones his sister used to make. We stepped back and ran as fast as we can away from the school.
Christopher Tu
The Lotus Pond
Telling ghost stories is a common part of youth culture in Hong Kong. The stories are passed on from generation to generation of students. The ghosts in these stories are also, as shown, closely related to the ghosts of popular religion. The urban myth i want to talk about in this essay is a myth that some of us may know its called “The Lotus Pond” A survey in the web showed that the story was heard 56% in public areas which means its a popular ghost story. The story started with a couple planned to elope. They planned to meet at 10 P.M. one night by the Lotus Pond. The girl arrived and waited for her boyfriend for a long time but he did not show up. She thought he must have broken his promise and was so angry that she jumped into the pond [and drowned herself ]. After that, when a boy passes by the pond at night, he will encounter a girl he does not recognize who will ask him the time. If he answers that it is 10:00, she will pull him into the pond. To me thats a very scary myth and I don’t think many people will actually do any of that stuff anymore. I think this story is transformed from an ancient story from the ancient times and was turned into an urban myth.
By: Christopher Tu
Marion Chu (8-3)
The Tale of the Haunted Bathroom
I was in VSA since primary. I always heard rumours of places in the school being haunted, blood handprints printed on the walls of the back staircase. The most common rumour that I have heard was that the girl’s bathroom near the music room on the 4/F is haunted, and i I bet that some other students would have heard of it before.
Rumour has it that when the people were building the school, there was a little girl that lived in Aberdeen near the school. One day, the little girl was in the Park n’ shop near the school with her grandmother one afternoon. She thought that it would be funny to run away then having her grandmother to notice that she’s gone. So she ran out of the supermarket, slipping through the crowd without her grandma noticing. She ran down the street, passing the police station and down to the construction area. She slipped through the fences into the construction area. She ran across the dirt, she was so little and wearing dark clothes that the construction workers couldn’t see her from the big and tall machines they are driving. Suddenly, a man driving a dragline excavator was pulling huge and heavy metal, the excavator turned, the metal swung right into the little girl and knocked her to the ground a few metres away, dead. She lied down near a pile of dirt, not moving a muscle, as the other construction workers pour more dirt on to the pile, burying the little girl without noticing.
There the little girl lay dead, without a single person knowing, rumour says that the 4/F Girl’s bathroom was build right next to the hill she was buried in. You could sometimes hear her wailing for her grandmother, crying and screeching at night.