On Nov 26, 3:16 pm, grasshopper5825 <
Grasshopper5...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Take a breath , my big chance,uh...(well) deep subject. <--Not a complete sentence.
> he already
> knows what is what in his heart I don't have to tell him he already
> said maybe he has changed...but who am I that it is claim I am just a
> poor pitful ,tortured, creature of this earth not the world...so now I
> must go around being tortured and being pitful. uhmmmm...<--Is this one long sentence or several short ones? What does you being a creature of the world have to do with what's in his heart. What does being a creature of this earth not the world mean? The earth is the world so this makes no sense.
> Maybe wants
> God wants you to not miss anything...<---This sentence is a bit better. We can even see that the extra "wants" was probably a mistake and still make some sense of it. The only problem is the ellipses at the end. A period would have been better.
> back to the subject....<Why the ellipses here? the
> difference...<--and here? of the two...<--and here?
> hey I spelled that right I am being more
> aware and learning or is it that I have just a little rust on
> me......<---Sticking this in the way you did makes it very hard to follow. If you want to insert something like that it's best to use dashes or paranethses to show it's seperate from the rest of the sentence. That's one reason why the way you use ellipses makes your posts confusing. You seem to use them for everything. If it's a pause, use a comma. If it's the end of a sentence, use a period. If it's a separate thought, use dashes or parantheses.
> I don't know him to really say if he is or not...<--A little better, but use a period. The sentence structure is a little odd, but if English is not your first language, we can forgive that.
>Hear
> say....Big chance uh...lets think positive.....no he is not...<--Short choppy sentences that don't make sense. Hearsay I understand, the rest is confusing. Big chance of what? Think postive about what? He is not what? The ellipses and the fact that we don't know what you're refering to makes it seem like you had several unfinished thoughts and then just trailed off.
You might want to pick up a little book called "the Elements of Style"
by Strunk and White. It's very short, but will tell you all you need
to know.
>
> On Nov 23, 2:08 pm, bonfly <
anub...@aapt.net.au> wrote:
>
>
>
> > Hi gr.assblower5825, here's your big chance. Maybe God led you here
> > for a reason. I dunno, I just sort get this eerie feeling that this
> > might be true. Keith McNevins on this message board is a self
> > declared homosexual. Maybe God wants you to convert him to
> > christianity?
>
> > Oh wait, he already is a christian. How do you explain that?
>
> > On Nov 24, 4:45 am, grasshopper5825 <
Grasshopper5...@gmail.com> wrote:
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> > > Hello, I just don't know...I find no humor in loss and mockery and at
> > > the same time out of their mouths sin.....I choose to weep......for
> > > such loss a few genarations down ...The world is the world ...That it
> > > is the world and the lust their of and some are hoping that the staff
> > > does not fall where they are...I can not and will not uphold
> > > Gays...but to save just one .....
>
> > > On Nov 23, 9:25 am, Trance Gemini <
trancegemi...@gmail.com> wrote:
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> > > > These YouTube videos are pretty funny. Courtesy of my daughter.
>
> > > >
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Goq1s_1VwdU
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> > > >
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pPdFrW076R0&feature=related
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> > > >
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ARAwp-lvI6c
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> > > > On Nov 23, 10:12 am, Drafterman <
drafter...@gmail.com> wrote:
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> > > > >
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